Bonus Content: Fic - Center of Attention by thusspakekate

[shy_of_reality]

Title: Center of Attention
Username: thusspakekate
Pairing: Draco/Pansy, Pansy/Daphne
Type: Threesome
Prompt: #87 - Daphne is not really into boys, but she likes to experiment, and it turns out as long as she gets to fuck Pansy, she doesn't really mind if Draco is watching or even participating a little bit.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count:6,280
Warnings/content:

Comments

[tamlane]

Well fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck me.

This is one of the hottest fics I’ve read all freaking year. Like, I had to keep pausing and putting it aside because it was almost too hot for me to cope with it. Fuck. I don’t even know where to start.

I’ll start with Daphne. Her POV is outstanding. I can relate to her so much that it’s almost scary. The feeling like a third wheel, her jealousy and resentment of Draco. Knowing she’s not in love but not knowing how to define what she feels for Pansy. Her total disregard for Draco once she has Pansy’s attention, and all the eye-rolling over Draco’s imcompetence. AND THIS:

Boys would never be able to understand how good it felt just to grind. They thought that sex began and ended with penetration, that you could just stick it in and jackhammer away. But she and Pansy knew better.

That’s just made of win.

Draco complied quickly, shoving his pants down that his cock sprung up comically, bobbing in the air. Pansy grinned and grabbed hold of it, pulling him even closer as if his prick were a lead.

And that just about killed me. It’s so... objectifying and... IDK, subversive towards men, which turns me on so much that I almost feel guilty about it (but not quite, LOL). That’s an element that I often feel is missing in M/F/F fic - that camaraderie between the two women and ridicule of the man. I mean, Draco is basically just this random, flabbergasted piece of meat who very rightfully cannot believe his luck, and it makes me cackle and squirm all at once.

Except that Draco’s not just that because this fic is incredibly multi-dimensional. That first string of dirty talk out of his mouth nearly floored me, and boy did the dirty talk just keep getting hotter and hotter. And I love the surprising tenderness that he shows for Pansy despite (or because of) his roughness, which hints at something much deeper between them - and something more substantial to Pansy’s character than the snarky bitch façade. The fact that she’s never shown Daphne that side is delicious and of course leads me to believe that she wants something more here than to just be the center of attention.

*SIGH*

The scene where Draco chokes her with his cock was A++++++++ stuff, by the way. Probably my favorite moment in the fic, kinkwise, and masterfully described.

AND THAT’S ANOTHER THING. Your description, my god. That’s something else that I often find missing in M/F/F fic (and het and femmeslash in general): the absolutely shameless level of description you’ve written here. I mean, Jesus Christ, you did not hold back when it came to the tits and arse and pussy, and you called a cunt a cunt, and I love you for it. (Though I wouldn’t expect any less from your writing.) Mechanically, this piece is masterful all the way around. The pacing, and the seamless transitioning, and the keeping up with various states of undress, which I always find a challenge. ;) People just don’t know what it takes to write threesome smut like this. LOL.

Jesus, the doggy-style sex. And Draco’s first orgasm, holy moly. I mean, I could sit here and ramble all day about everything I found hot about this fic, but it was basically the whole fic. And I gotta say, fisting is usually squicky for me, but you did a great job of making it as much about the trust between them all as it was about the kink, and it totally worked for me.

Also, the thought that Daphne is going to buy a dildo for Pansy to suck on nearly makes my head explode. I will refrain from begging you for a femmeslash sequel.

This whole fic felt so real to me. I don’t know, sometimes I feel like authors write M/F/F just to be hot or cute or something, and I get the feeling that they’ve approached the smut almost laboriously. It feels contrived and... not felt. But I get the feeling from this that you were solely out for your own amusement and titillation here, and there’s something so pure about that.

I can’t thank you enough for writing and sharing this threesome masterpiece. ♥ ♥ ♥