First-person sample: The first day of a new school is bound to be awkward. It wouldn't be so bad if I was, for example, a normal student going to a normal high school. But, alas, I'm going to a school where wolves and vampires roam the hallways and I question how much longer I have before I turn into one of them. A wolf, that is. No way would I turn into something cold.
My thoughts halted as the lady behind the desk smiled up at me. "Are you new, honey?" she asked me. "There's been so many of you," she mumbled.
I returned her smile kilowatt for kilowatt. "Yes, ma'am," and answered her. I pulled out my required forms and pushed them across the counter towards her. She took them into her meaty hands and typed in some things into the computer. I brushed my long, dark brown bangs from my eyes and watched as the second hand made it's way excruciatingly slowly around the clock.
"Oh dear me," she clucked. "It looks like you're signed up for Freshmen English." I sighed and gathered my things. I mouthed the next words with her. "It looks like you're going to go see guidance." Welcome, Kaya Ateara, to Forks High.
Third-person sample: Kaya's long brown ponytail bounced up and down against her back as she trotted through the campus, looking for building 4. After the fiasco in the main office concerning her schedule, Kaya wasn't in the best of moods. However, she fixed a cordial smile onto her face as she rounded the corner, her destination in sight. She slowed down and caught her breath before making sure her pony tail was still in tact. After knocking on the door, she let herself into the room filled with seniors of Forks High. Her smile faltered a bit as she searched for the teacher, ignoring the stares of the students.
After two minutes of tortured introductions to the class, Kaya spotted Sarah and took a seat next to her as her cheeks regained their natural color. "Hey you," she whispered as she pulled a binder and a pencil out of her bag. She glanced at the teacher and put her pencil to the paper. Bring it on, Forks High.
Other contact information: You know it by now.
Ok. So, this is the brainchild of me and Bella (bellasblues). What do you think? She'll draw out some of the softer sides of Quil.
My thoughts halted as the lady behind the desk smiled up at me. "Are you new, honey?" she asked me. "There's been so many of you," she mumbled.
I returned her smile kilowatt for kilowatt. "Yes, ma'am," and answered her. I pulled out my required forms and pushed them across the counter towards her. She took them into her meaty hands and typed in some things into the computer. I brushed my long, dark brown bangs from my eyes and watched as the second hand made it's way excruciatingly slowly around the clock.
"Oh dear me," she clucked. "It looks like you're signed up for Freshmen English." I sighed and gathered my things. I mouthed the next words with her. "It looks like you're going to go see guidance." Welcome, Kaya Ateara, to Forks High.
Third-person sample: Kaya's long brown ponytail bounced up and down against her back as she trotted through the campus, looking for building 4. After the fiasco in the main office concerning her schedule, Kaya wasn't in the best of moods. However, she fixed a cordial smile onto her face as she rounded the corner, her destination in sight. She slowed down and caught her breath before making sure her pony tail was still in tact. After knocking on the door, she let herself into the room filled with seniors of Forks High. Her smile faltered a bit as she searched for the teacher, ignoring the stares of the students.
After two minutes of tortured introductions to the class, Kaya spotted Sarah and took a seat next to her as her cheeks regained their natural color. "Hey you," she whispered as she pulled a binder and a pencil out of her bag. She glanced at the teacher and put her pencil to the paper. Bring it on, Forks High.
Other contact information: You know it by now.
Ok. So, this is the brainchild of me and Bella (bellasblues). What do you think? She'll draw out some of the softer sides of Quil.
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okay so rachael i love you right now xD
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the more wolves the better
:D:D:D:D
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Haha. Yay. I'm excited about playing her.
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we're making a thread now. is she related to quil?
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(still mair) ahahahaa
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I probably won't be able to RP tonight, but feel free to reference her or Embry. =)
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