(for teatimetaemint) You Make My Dreams Come True

Dec 30, 2014 00:29

For: teatimetaemint

Title: You Make My Dreams Come True
Pairing: Jongin/Xiumin
Word Count: ~8,000 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings:: some swearing
Summary: All Jongin wanted was to sleep. What he got was something better.
Author's Note: I'd just like to thank teatimetaemint for giving such fun prompts! I strayed quite a bit from your prompt T_T I'm sorry T_T I ( Read more... )

# 2014-15, rating: pg-13, pairing: jongin/xiumin

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teatimetaemint December 30 2014, 23:03:26 UTC
OKAY I'M BACK... and I'm so in love! *____*
This was such a sweet and lovely story and I enjoyed reading it so much!

The Kaisoo friendship was actually so precious, they went from “It’s nothing, shithead. I’m not even gonna feed you,” to Kyungsoo wanting (demanding LOL) to meet Minseok because it's his duty as a best friend. And then all that good-natured teasing about Jongin being so obviously infatuated! I liked their friendship so much.

And don't worry, I actually loved all the stuff you added to the prompt. I wanted to scream in happiness when you brought up the whole dancing aspect. I HAVE SUCH A WEAKNESS FOR DANCER!MINSEOK and his abilities are so incredibly underrated, which is why I was ridiculously happy you made them both dancers. (Also yessss to dance team captain Taemin and Sexing pairing up for their showcase!) It actually turned out to be one of my favorite things about this story, so thank you for being so creative with my prompt, but also paying attention to the essential things I asked for. You handled that so wonderfully!

The growing friendship between Minseok and Jongin had me grinning like an idiot. Shy Jongin was such a cutie, Minseok was simply great and the fact that they both noticed each other before officially meeting was A+ (I'm such a sucker for stuff like that). Them bonding over dance and books and Minseok helping Jongin with his workload, it just all added up to a truly sweet friendship that turned into more and that's basically my favorite thing in the world.
Also I loved how easy and natural the transition from friends to boyfriends was. Their first hug made me feel all fluffy and gooey inside (THE CUTENESS) and you had me all but cooing with that ‘Hyung, I like you’ and ‘I like you too’. Jongin worried so much about it, but then the whole confession went so smoothly and I just find that utterly adorable.
/sighs happily

Honorary mention for roommate Chanyeol, who was simply such a hilarious mess xD

I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS WONDERFULLY FLUFFY PIECE! YOU MADE ME SO RIDICULOUSLY HAPPY!

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