[ViewFinder] To Love is to Destroy

[forgottenraine]

Title: To Love is to Destroy
Characters: Fei Long, Yan
Disclaimer: All characters belong to Ayano Yamane. I own only the plot line.
Warning: Animal brutality
Rating: PG-13
Beta: Unbetaed

Attention: Considering that this is my first English fanfic, and the fact English is not my first language and it is not betaed, I truly wish you will NOT be throwing

Comments

[forgottenraine]

Thanks for taking your time to come read this. I would love as much feedback as possible so I know what to improve on. I seriously have no idea how I came up with something like that. Like I said, I pulled this idea right out of my butt. I think I am going to use this kinds of short pieces as lead-ins to my dream plotline (but I don't think I will be writing it anytime soon tho). So pretty much I am just playing around with different ideas at the moment.

There he would spent the rest of the night, under the violent storm, digging... with his bare hands, a grave for the tiny animal he loved.

That was my favorite line. I have no control over the twisted and weird idea I pull out of my butt and basically I build the entire piece around that line. *giggles*

I won't offer to beta on this, sorry :P

Haha no worries. I knew there would be mistakes going into this. For the life of me, I can't help but to screw up on grammar and tenses mistakes. Maybe I can eventually finds someone to beta it for me haha. But until then, your eyes will have to suffer through my mistakes. haha.

Also, I gotta say: I love Yan Tzui, and Faye does too

You know what? If Asami, Mik and Yoh (yes even Yoh) wasn't as sexy or as domniating as they are. I wouldn't mind reading a few YanXFei fics at all. I like his character a lot actually, but I am just too caught up in the Asami/Mik/YohXFei relationship that I don't think about him as much as I should.

[delwynmarch]

Short random pieces is a lot of what I do too, so it'd better be fine or I've been doing it wrong for a long time :D

I have no control over the twisted and weird idea I pull out of my butt and basically I build the entire piece around that line.

If you think that line was twisted... I mean, sure, it wasn't healthy, but this is Fei and Yan we're talking about, so that's pretty much a given, right :P ?

You know what? If Asami, Mik and Yoh (yes even Yoh) wasn't as sexy or as domniating as they are. I wouldn't mind reading a few YanXFei fics at all. I like his character a lot actually, but I am just too caught up in the Asami/Mik/YohXFei relationship that I don't think about him as much as I should.

Well, I do know that there are a few fics for that pairing out there, but they are quite rare. I'm not into explicit YanxFei personally, but I've been told there is at least one excellent one, though I can't remember neither the title nor the author. Maybe Faye or someone else would remember?

[forgottenraine]

If you think that line was twisted... I mean, sure, it wasn't healthy, but this is Fei and Yan we're talking about, so that's pretty much a given, right :P ?

That is so true. So I guess I can justify the animal brutality
AND making Fei kill that little pup. If Fei was here, he would probably put a bullet right between my eyes now. *giggles*.

I'm not into explicit YanxFei personally, but I've been told there is at least one excellent one, though I can't remember neither the title nor the author. Maybe Faye or someone else would remember?

I see YanXFei more as a speical, expensive midnight dessert that you need once in a very long while than anything else. It is like a snack that you can munch on when you are tired of waiting for an amazing AsamiXFei fic that has been discontinued, or a MikXFei fic that ended the chapter in a cliffhanger or a YohXFei fic that you are still trying to wrap your finger around. Haha.