Liquid Musing

[forgottenlover]

Title: Liquid Musing
Author: Skeren Dreamera
Word count: 1,981
Type: Greed-centric fic
Note: Written for pinstripesuit’s doujin contest. One such contest I almost completely forgot I was going to enter… eh heh heh? ::faint grin::

Comments

[empty_geas]

Lovely, wonderful fic. Pre-sealed Greed is very yummy and I loved the earlier version of The Nest.

Drip, drip, drip

Kaboom.
Nice way to end it.

*cuddles fic and saves it*

[forgottenlover]

::laughs quietly:: Thank you, I just can't help thinking 'he owned the nest before, I know he did'

[skyler_daemon]

Wow, I love this and I need to stop comparing my stuff to fics like this.

Your Greed is very nice and the interaction between the the diffrent people was really well done.

And I will now stop babbling and go back to my hiding.

[forgottenlover]

::hugs securely:: Greed never gets background. It's always Envy that does ::pokes Envy:: well, from me anyway

[celes_grant]

... I forgot there was a previous Lust. Thanks for reminding me. Poor Greed =x= he was only trying to make a living.....

[forgottenlover]

::nods:: he just wanted... to be free to want

[baeckahaesten]

I really do feel sorry for Greed in this...and there was a nice sort of flowing feel to the recollections, and the feeling of the sins being close and their immortailty...there're a couple of capital letter nitpicks on proper names, but that's really minor.

[forgottenlover]

::nods slightly:: Yeah, that was the idea. His memories and the missing bits and pieces.