Elder

Feb 06, 2006 10:30

Title: Elder
240 word short
Worksafe
Note: I’m gonna make you guess the characters now.

Apologies )

greed, fma, envy, oneshots

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crack_alchemist February 6 2006, 18:10:06 UTC
um. yeah. um.

envy and greed?

first post. woo-hoo?

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forgottenlover February 7 2006, 05:04:49 UTC
::snickers::

Indeed, though did you have to look at the tags to get it?

Sounds good to me! ::cheers::

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tir_synni February 6 2006, 18:10:30 UTC
Ouch. Just . . . ouch. *whistles*

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forgottenlover February 7 2006, 05:05:50 UTC
::grins widely:: isn't it though?

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greedyslayer February 8 2006, 01:50:48 UTC
Cool, very cool. Not usually a fan of Envy being the one to seal Greed--I typically think it's Dante, or even Hoenheim for some reason--but I like this scenario, in which Envy gets his way through sheer trickery. (Saw the tags first before the note.)

"Either way, it would hardly be the last time he trusted too much."

Favorite line out of the whole thing, awesome foreshadowing of the Kimbley betrayal, and so true of Greed; one of his easy-to-see weaknesses, is that once he gives out trust, it can be simply used to screw him over. And yet, I do like that about him--a perfect weakness to balance out all the other great stuff about him. (And it somehow makes him look cuter to me.)

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forgottenlover February 8 2006, 04:36:31 UTC
::grins widely:: I don't believe Envy set up the array, or anything of that kind, I simply believe he get the man there

I'm glad you like my close. ::laughs:: and what is greed without his blindsiding trust?

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