Comments | forgottenlover: Trade

forgottenlover

Trade

Feb 05, 2006 05:01

Title: Trade
Pairings: Sloth/Greed.
Rating: G.
Wordcount: 375.
Notes: Sloth Spoilers (if that’s still a worry). Definitely an AU of sorts. Written for Fma500

( One thing for another )

greed, fma, sloth/greed, sloth, oneshots

Comments 6

akira_chan February 5 2006, 14:10:29 UTC

Oooh, this was interesting...and fits in canon. XD

forgottenlover February 5 2006, 14:11:18 UTC

It does? ::utterly baffled look::

theladyfeylene February 5 2006, 17:23:03 UTC

Ooooh, very nice! I really like the dynamic that was built up in this fic!

forgottenlover February 5 2006, 17:45:42 UTC

::small grin and a flourish of a bow:: They've been stuck in my head since your meme

greedyslayer February 7 2006, 01:58:11 UTC

Yes, very good dynamic between the two, and I'm so glad to see others' interpretations of Sloth/Greed.

It's short, but the length is natural and goes well with the whole thing; if anything, it leaves the reader wanting more Sloth/Greed from you. *hint hint* The shortness of it is akin to a snapshot in the couple's lives, and I take it that there's some ambiguity as to whether or not they've made love to each other yet, and I like that ambiguity; again, as a snapshot, it shows things, implies things, and leaves the future open.

Also, like the plot bit of Greed's Chimeras as an easier endeavor, as just a favor from "His Sloth." (OMG, love how he's uses the possessive on her near the end, and it doesn't sound overly dominating at all to me, just loving and endearing and so, so...well, Greed.)

forgottenlover February 7 2006, 05:24:56 UTC

::laughs softly:: I'm glad the dynamic is liked

Nooo, I've been doing very good to muffle them from speaking to me anymore abotu this universe ::pout::

::grins:: and that was just Greed being Greed, what can I say?