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Oct 16, 2004 14:25

Sitting there, thinking ( Read more... )

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whatxwentxwrong October 16 2004, 21:25:14 UTC
I like this one.

" Dark and cold.
My eyes are closed.

Dark and white.
I'm going through changes tonight.

How can..
..this feel right?
Here tonight.

I feel unsafe.
Well I feel caught.
Will you come chase me, and hold my heart?
I'm not shameful, and I'm not mean.
Take it back, and watch me scream.
IT WAS ALL JUST A MISTAKE.
Just an honest mistake?
A mistake that holds you close at night.
A mistake you fall asleep with.
A mistake to whisper that you're right.
Just a mistake.
A mistake."

Those are my favorite parts.
Now all you need are a feww pretty pictures to complete them.
I've got in guy in mind that could help you there.
..and he's my good pal.
You guys would make magic together.
With your poems and his pictures, of course.

<3333333333333

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ashburnbabyburn October 17 2004, 02:26:18 UTC
totally agree... :) and i think your words are amazing. haha you should see the horendous things i write. pathetic. <3

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