Title: Even If Your Heart Stops
Author: foreverwriting9
Characters/Pairings: Jane/Lisbon
Spoilers: Vaguely for Red Velvet Cupcakes
Rating: G
Word Count: 2,420
Summary: In that moment he sees everything they are and everything they could be laid out in front of him. It is beautiful and shining and brimming with impossibility.
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There were so many heartfelt, excellent lines in this fic. Your writing always has such a softness, I don't know how to describe it. You manage to make them both say things that, if the wording was different, it may sound weird and cheesy. But it doesn't here. It sounds true, vulnerable and just.. lovely.
The mix between canon and "fic" blends so well. I almost feel the final part of the fic will be the scene we probably won't get to see after the finale (not that I know anything about it, haven't even watched the promo), because it rings so very true with how they are.
I just can't get over how subtle and sweet this fic is. You show they love each other without ever saying the word.
This is precious ♥
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I absolutely love getting your comments. They easily make my day, and help keep me motivated to continue writing. And I'm so glad that you enjoyed this fic, I had a really good time writing it.
I absolutely cannot wait for the finale, it's going to be fantastic.
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Hope you don't mind.
Actually you can hardly blame me, not really, writing them both in character and endearment like you do.
I can't stay to chat, I saw there was more where this came from.
Just a question, no criticism, just a need to know thingy:
Will you ever get past the UST before canon does?
I kinda hope you will.
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In answer to your question: I have a few fics that explore them being in an actual relationship, but they're normally just quick scenes, I think. I'm still not totally comfortable writing them with anything more than UST.
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