Iruka has lost his memories and become a ninja of the mist. And can use Water jutsu. That is what I can make out of your prologue, what could you make out of mine?
And you have a nice style, though it would make it a little easier to read if you used 'Enter' some more times and made some of the paragraphs smaller.
Heh yeah I know spacing can always use some work. For some reason I feel the need to just continue unless I am done with that thought. Since my thoughts can go on a while it gets a tad cluttered lol.
TFS. . . was a interesting one. Flashbacks and time jumps around coupled with feelings of two different types makes for a interesting read to be honest. Nice conflict between the two.
I might have to take that advice granted I have the. I-must-stop-reading-my-own-fics-disease-or-i'll-never-post-a-story-disease. Heh too much one piece fan fiction and I am catching usopps's diseases.
I got into the pairing a little over a month ago. My curiosity + bored lead me into one piece verse and zosan was the only one I seemed to like. For some reason zoluffy scares me quite a bit. No idea why. Might have something to do with Zoro is a really hot piece of man candy. . . **thinks of the very naughty things he would do with someone like zoro and drools a bit.** Where was I?
Oh so yeah read through AFF.net moved to FF.net then ended up in zosan comm and found it by going backwards. Then read your LJ and started going through that.
Come to the OP-fandom, we have Devil Fruits and hot boys 8D
ZoLu is... Plausible in some moments, but still, Lu has no sexual drifts at all. And now I start wondering if it really were just girls you were chasing down the halls! XD
Ah~ Well, then I guess you've seen 'These Familiar Memories'? =3
Nooo don't say that Zoro is gay we all know that he likes his swords **nods**. For some reason i do not like her. . . she's like a more useful version of Sakura! Robin on the other had <3. Although no ZoRob either.
**washes brain out with mindsoap to get the ZoNami out of there**. She's a main ch anyway so she'll likely end up with luffy so at least I have that to comfort me. If she and zo end up together at the end of one piece I will have a breakdown.
I think I can second you on that. Though I don't find any girl in OP attractive. And we won't find any Romance in OP, Boa was the tool used to prove that .w.
Msn, btw? We've filled out too many comments soon, IMO XD
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Glad to see you like it! I love plot devices and hope the prologue sets up a lot of them!
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And you have a nice style, though it would make it a little easier to read if you used 'Enter' some more times and made some of the paragraphs smaller.
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TFS. . . was a interesting one. Flashbacks and time jumps around coupled with feelings of two different types makes for a interesting read to be honest. Nice conflict between the two.
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Thank you~ Btw, have you been seeing my updates and thought about reading it but haven't done it before now or what?
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I got into the pairing a little over a month ago. My curiosity + bored lead me into one piece verse and zosan was the only one I seemed to like. For some reason zoluffy scares me quite a bit. No idea why. Might have something to do with Zoro is a really hot piece of man candy. . . **thinks of the very naughty things he would do with someone like zoro and drools a bit.** Where was I?
Oh so yeah read through AFF.net moved to FF.net then ended up in zosan comm and found it by going backwards. Then read your LJ and started going through that.
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Come to the OP-fandom, we have Devil Fruits and hot boys 8D
ZoLu is... Plausible in some moments, but still, Lu has no sexual drifts at all. And now I start wondering if it really were just girls you were chasing down the halls! XD
Ah~ Well, then I guess you've seen 'These Familiar Memories'? =3
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**pats you** Babe I like guys. . . I wont deny it. Granted I have mostly girlfriends so I get to chase them.
I just hope zoro doesn't end up with Nami **shudders**. Why sanji do you like her so much **fake sob**.
Don't think I have where is it **prods you** is it based off TFS cause sometimes I read to much to know what i read and didn't read lol.
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Nami is Sanji's beard. And ZoNa is more plausible than SaNa. But I will never write either, I think (>w>)
It's on my LJ XD Otherwise you can check my ff-account, it's my website if you go to my Journal =3
Contains even more Streetness~
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Nooo don't say that Zoro is gay we all know that he likes his swords **nods**. For some reason i do not like her. . . she's like a more useful version of Sakura! Robin on the other had <3. Although no ZoRob either.
**washes brain out with mindsoap to get the ZoNami out of there**. She's a main ch anyway so she'll likely end up with luffy so at least I have that to comfort me. If she and zo end up together at the end of one piece I will have a breakdown.
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I think I can second you on that. Though I don't find any girl in OP attractive. And we won't find any Romance in OP, Boa was the tool used to prove that .w.
Msn, btw? We've filled out too many comments soon, IMO XD
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Sure JJbad_14@yahoo.com should be my msn as well as YIM
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