New Pros fic - Whip in my valise

May 26, 2012 19:45

Just a little fic.  It's been aaages since I posted a Pros fic!

Whip in my valise )

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sc_fossil May 26 2012, 19:46:38 UTC
I enjoyed your fic very much. I liked seeing Doyle in meltdown through the other agents' eyes and the running line of how does he (Bodie) out up with him". In the end, we discover that Bodie was right here with Doyle, quietly letting Doyle vent while he was just as upset. Nice!

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foreverfoxcat May 26 2012, 20:30:33 UTC
Hee, thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it. :D And we know exactly why Bodie puts up with Doyle, don't we? :D

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milomaus May 26 2012, 20:43:58 UTC
Lovely little fic, very nice ending!
Sounds so much like the lads!
I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for sharing!

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foreverfoxcat May 26 2012, 21:04:07 UTC
Aw, thank you very much. I'm really glad you liked it. :D

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snailbones May 26 2012, 21:07:35 UTC


Love it, thank you! I always enjoy outside viewpoints, and I love Bodie dealing with Doyle as only Bodie can *g*

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 06:37:57 UTC
Thank you. :D It is interesting imagining what the other agents must make of our lads and the relationship between them, isn't it? If only they knew!

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solosundance May 26 2012, 23:07:33 UTC
Eeee that was fab! I love the running refrain and the observations of the others. And especially the denouement with Doyle bringing Bodie tea in the bath - which would about make him my dream lover :)) So glad you've posted some more fic, I love how you write the lads.

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 06:39:32 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! Yeah, the tea-in-the-bath thing may have been a bit of a fantasy fulfilment on my part, too. A girl can dream, can't she? :D

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freddiejoey May 26 2012, 23:11:58 UTC
Lovely fic.

Thanks for a great read on a chilly Qld morning.

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foreverfoxcat May 27 2012, 06:40:06 UTC
Thank you, I'm really pleased you liked it. I hope it warmed you up a little!

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