This Isn't Happening

[foreign_element]

Title: This isn’t Happening
Rating: PG-13/R?
Disclaimer: I own nothing, etc.
Summary: The O.C. (Yes, you read that right!) Summer/Ryan Second person POV Post Finale stuff. Approx. 378

Comments

[elzed]

Whee! You wrote OC!!! You wrote Summer Ryan!!! You wrote dark angsty with a hint of smut!!!

And I can so see Ryan and Summer bonding over their loss - one way or another.

Oh, Heath, it's good to have you back.

(and I'm sorry I haven't said hi much - I haven't been reading your Office fic)

Hope all is good with you.

[foreign_element]

I know! I even shocked myself! Thanks, babe. ;)

[brandywine421]

This is so dark and sad - it's no wonder I love it.

Even you haven’t held her. At least, not the way she needs to be held. Great way to drive home this image of her so desperate for attention, for love - redemption whatever - and how he's just not cabable of giving her what she needs...at least not that.

She tastes like broken dreams. Beautiful.

Because you can’t remember what this is supposed to feel like. *sniff*

Great.

[foreign_element]

Thanks so much! See, I still write OC fic! ;)

[60schic]

Welcome back, girl. Great end line. I imagine 'feeling' is the first thing to go and the last to return. Excellent.

[foreign_element]

Thanks!

[foreign_element]

Thanks so much!

[emrose33]

This is just brilliant.
You've captured the despair and pain of it all so vividly. And it's so heartbreaking and frustrating that Ryan can see how much Summer is crying out for comfort and love, but is unable to give it her in any other way than this
And no one has stopped long enough to hold her. Even you haven’t held her. At least, not the way she needs to be held.
*sobs*

[foreign_element]

Wow, thank you very much!