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forceworks

Whose LJ is it anyway?

Jan 15, 2008 13:54

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dubheach January 15 2008, 21:30:40 UTC

This is wonderful. Well done.

puppetmaker40 January 15 2008, 22:15:43 UTC

If I may ask, how long did it take you to compose this?

I am impressed at the amount of information you managed to squeeze into this poem.

forceworks January 16 2008, 00:05:42 UTC

20-30 minutes, once I decided how I was going to approach it.

tulip_in_yellow January 16 2008, 02:05:14 UTC

To me,
Those who wail and lash out,
Ignoring the feelings of their audience
Do not deserve the respect they've given.

I think there might be a typo in there. I only mention it because it detracts from the greatness that is this entry. I'm not much a fan of rhyming poetry, but more complicated rhymes I can handle. I liked this very much.

forceworks January 16 2008, 03:16:49 UTC

I believe you are right. I seem to be missing a whole word. Edited.

kittenboo January 16 2008, 02:14:24 UTC

great post, you found a way to talk about the topic and still make it interesting to read, which seems difficult this time around

libra_dragon January 16 2008, 02:33:01 UTC

nice entry!
I really love how you were able to be short, sweet and to the point and really hit it home with the poem. You have a great way with words