The Prison Within - Adam/Elle ♥ - Chapter 10

[force_oblique]

Title: The Prison Within - Chapter 10
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, possibly AU
Table/Prompt: Table #7,"helpless"
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Adam/Elle - mention of other characters ,Adam's POV
Word Count: 1073
Summary: While Adam was held captive in the company, he watched Elle grow. But more than that, the two of them became

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[dana_serenity]

Had she known me twenty years ago, that trust that she had put in my hands, that blind devotion, that vulnerability would be the ideal weapon in my hands. The perfect weapon for me to tear her down and feed on her misery.
Oh girly girl how I love your descriptions!! And so dead on too!!

If I had once tried to turn the world into a living hell, wasn’t it because I wanted the world outside and around me to match the one inside me?
Holy my! This one required some thinking but guh! that's such a strong image!!

Who's the boy? Am I supposed to know the boy?

Great work as always honey!

[force_oblique]

Awww!
Thank you so much!!
To be honest with you...I hated that part. I thought it was horrible and ludicrous...Unlike other times when I liked something, it felt like there was nothing I liked about this part...
But you helped me think otherwise!
Thank you! ;) <333

Aww, I'm glad you liked that!!
In a sense Adam was already in hell since he had shed his humanity back when Yaeko and Hiro betrayed him....

Nah, you are not supposed to know the boy...unless you are psychic! lol

Thank you so much! :D

[dream_infinity0]

There was a time when I was very angry. Angry at some people, angry at the world, at humanity but mostly at myself” I concluded, finally realizing it myself.
If I had once tried to turn the world into a living hell, wasn’t it because I wanted the world outside and around me to match the one inside me?

This part was really good, made me think that adam was changing slighly.maybe becoming good.

great work

[force_oblique]

Thank you, Tracey!
I'm glad you liked this part.
Like I said, I wasnt really sure about it! :)

[ilikethequiet]

*giggles* They brought Elle a boy! Yay!

But Adam strikes me as the easily jealous type, people trying to take his girl away from him.

I love this, I'll wait eagerly for more!

[force_oblique]

Hehe!!!
You are not that far off! :)
Thank you!!
I have finally found the time to continue and finish this one!!
Five more parts now so woot! :D

[fullwingedlove]

“It’s always about a girl!” Elle said with a sigh and went on with a sly smirk “Some day the girl could be me” OMGosh, that was simply precious! I mean I could really picture younger her saying that. When I read that...it was just great!

O.O

You and your cliff-hangers, I swear as much as I hate them...I love them. ;) I mean every single time you end with me praising...and strongly disliking you. And I mean disliking in a good way...the way that I want to continously poke you until you write the next chapter. Me and my rude ways :P.

Can you believe it?! 10 chapters!!! You should be so proud that is an amazing thing, I mean that's like great. TEN friggin awesome chapters...ten. (if you have yet to notice, I am still shocked as to the amount...TEN!) Wow, and in each one...Elle and Adam are so sadly awesome. I say sad because it is, but awesome...because it is.

Yeah, I was so nervous and I couldnt sleep for days! I stayed at the hospital! (responding to what you said earlier in here...sorry!) I've heard that you can get really

[force_oblique]

Awwwww!
I know I always start my replies to you this way..but I cant help it, you make me feel so good about myself each time! lol
I am not sure I deserve it, but it's certainly welcome! lol

Haha, you are not rude...like at all! It;s nice that my cliff-hangers annoy you...thats what they are there for! lol

Yep, and *squeee* The fanmix is ready...i might an unlocked entry to you so that you will be the first to see it and let me know what you think! :)

Yeah those chairs were unconfy but at least i had the book New Moon with me and it was bearable!
My bro is all better now and is already at his house!
I am visiting on Friday! :)

Hehe, well you havent updated since January 20th thats practicallya month!! lol =P

[xkillxgirlx]

Oh god you have to keep going! I need to know who this boy is. I would say Sylar if it wasn't for the ice power.

I'm predicting a jealous Adam in the coming chapters :)

[force_oblique]

Aww, wow I failed to reply sooner! lol
It only took me like two months! Oh gosh! lol
But thank you!
It's good to know that people have been following this! :)

I'd say you predict correctly! lol