Malice in Wonderland - Niki/Sylar - Part 1/3

[force_oblique]

Title: Malice in Wonderland - Part One
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G, possibly AU
Disclaimer: I dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Niki/Sylar - mention of other characters
Word Count: In Progress
Summary: Faced with an unlikely encounter with each other-set loosely in s2, Niki Sanders and Sylar make their own decisions of their future.
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[define_serenity]

Ok, first the beta:
She was not good period. --> She was not good. Period.

Niki Sanders wasn’t ever sure things were ever what she thought they were. --> Niki Sanders wasn't even sure things had ever been what she had thought they were.

Maybe she was never an innocent girl. --> Maybe she had never been an innocent girl

Maybe this darkness was there from the start, just lurking in the corners of her mind, waiting just waiting for the perfect opportunity ot come out. --> Maybe this darkness had been there from the start...

regret for her actions --> repent

Now for the squee:
I absolutely love this!! I love Niki's train of thought and especially that part where you reveal that Sylar is lonely!! Poor wooby needs a hug!!

[force_oblique]

Thank you for your help! ;)

I made the changes! Silly me messing up the tense!! I knew something was off but i just couldnt place it! lol

I am so happy you liked it!
I really wanted it to make sense, so I'm glad you thought it was meaningful!
Hehe, yep Sylar is lonely but his hunger for power os far stronger than those feelings! lol

[sellthelie]

Niki/Sylar... WOOT! There's isn't enough for these two, and I really liked this. Can't wait for more of it. :D

[force_oblique]

Aww!
Thank you!!!I'm glad you liked it.
You are right, there isn't enough Niki-Jessica/Sylar fiction around which is a shame! :(

[sotiria_auth]

It's been a while since you wrote a Niki fiction!
I like it!!
I really liked the other one you had written too: Random Tragedy!

This almost sounds like an afterthought.
I cant wait to see what will happen when she sees Sylar!

[force_oblique]

Oh my!!
Yuo are right!
I really liked that fiction too! Heeh! ;)
I should make a revised version of it! :)
Maybe there's a way to connect these two fics! :D

[quiet_elle]

wandering through livejournals i came upon this and had to conmment. Its beautiful. Well written and the description both of the scene and the emotions are incredible. Love it.

[force_oblique]

Thank you so much!
I'm so happy you liked it! :)

I really wish there was more Niki fiction around! :(