Relentless - VM Fiction (Short)

Aug 18, 2007 17:53

Unlocked post -For VM Communities :D

Title: Relentless
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer:Obviously, i dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Logan/ A bit of Veronica (Logan's POV)
Word Count: 1079
Summary: Logan's feelings after his final breakup with Veronica towards the end of season 3
Author's Notes: Might be crappy, especially since it is my ( Read more... )

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poniesforall September 28 2007, 17:09:33 UTC
"He 'd probably never admit it but he was never sure that she loved him as much as he loved her." Ahhh. You hit the nail on the head.

This was a very good character study. You might benefit from having a beta. There were some grammatical errors, but it didn' detract from the story. It was very good and tugged at my heart.

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force_oblique October 17 2007, 18:17:05 UTC
Aww! Thanks so much!!!!
It's been such a long while! Wow! Sorry for not replying and thanking you sooner! I havent been much online lately!!!

Thank you for your nice words!!!
And woot! How did you find this story? It wasnt posted on anywhere I think! lol
Haha! Thats cool! ;)

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