Triptych - Lilith, Dean/Sam/Ruby - [1/1] or Prologue?

[force_oblique]

Title: Triptych (Of Pain)
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Lilith, Dean/Sam/Ruby (This part Lilith POV)
Spoilers/Warnings: Mostly 3x16
Word Count: This part 1480, but I will probably have a few more parts to come XD
Summary: I look at the beautiful mess I've done. Three people broken, shuttered. All

Comments

[sotiria_auth]

^_^
That was really beautiful!
I have never read a story in Lilith's pov and she is such an interesting character.
I mean in the last episode she acted like a child and then the thing with her eyes being white and not black..
I would love t see more of her,and you left it at an evil place!
You need to write more about our Dean and Sam and poor Ruby!!!!

I really liked these lines

Sometimes it only flickers like a candle in the dark, in the wind…but sometimes it’s blinding - even to me- and both God and Hell know how many of these lights I have caused to die out.

His heart is hammering inside his chest, a chest my hell hound will have no problem ripping open.
And of course the whole ending!!!!!

More!

[force_oblique]

you are right, I have never read a Lilith story either!
I just thought it would be cool to have one! lol?
I know it's weird but it's ok right? Decent? i dont have to be ashamed of it?

Thanks hun!

[sotiria_auth]

I wonder why that is?
I mean we have only seen little of her but she was too cool to let it slide!
I mean she was a little girl and bam she dusted so many!
She is ruthless. I wonder why she stayed with that family. Do you think she is a child or adolescent in reality?
Don't be ridiculous!!!
There's nothing to be ashamed of, it is great!

[force_oblique]

I have no idea. Maybe it is because with Dean possibly ending up in hell most people wanted to focus on the brothers and just them?
If I turn this into a series I wont have Lilith as the main character either..it's just the prologue or a stand-alone ficlet!

I wondered too why she stayed with the family. My guess is that it was her way of having fun because she must be a child/teenager.
I mean the mannerisms Katie used in those final scenes were childlike.

Thankies! XD

[tahirire]

Ooh, good job. *shivers* Makes me want to cry all over again.

I cannot wait to find out. Soon, really soon …

Me either!! Is it September yet!?

[force_oblique]

Aww, thank you!!
I gave you the shivers? o_0 Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! XD

Yeah, I know the suspense is killing me and I'm trying to do something creative with all that speculation that goes on in my head! lol

[tahirire]

Lol, I'm doing that too! Waiting sucks!!

[force_oblique]

Oh coolies!I will make sure I read it asap! ;)

[ellie_fo_20]

YAY! My first fic dedication *dances around*

I really loved this fic, its the first Lilith one ive read, and man is she hardcore.
The whole part of Dean getting attacked by the hell hounds, just floored me, I didnt even watch it when i watched the episode, I put my hand in view of the television and turned my head, but I could hear him screaming and it was loud cause I blast my tv when i watch SPN or any other show for that matter. Oh my poor Dean!

I would love to see it continued or another fic of Sam and Lilith battling it out, but ya great story and thankies for the dedication ♥

BTW I am slowly writing out your birth chart, and ill send it right when i get finished :)

[force_oblique]

Really your first dedication?
wow, I didn't know that! :)
Hehe, yep! Lilith is hardcore,she is one mean bitch! =P
I know, it was so sad. i was watching it with my brother and even though we joked around it was really unpleasant!!

Whee, thanks for the comment and I wanna continue it! ;)
One-parters may follow too...who knows! ;)

Oh, coolies!!
Thanks so much!

[ellie_fo_20]

Im still new to all this fandom stuff
so bare with me ;)

Hell ya she is!
Yeah it was unpleasant
and know we got to wait until sept. :(

i hope you do continue it, i really liked it.

Give me a couple of days and ill email it to you :)

[force_oblique]

Awww, a newbie? Hehe, I wold never have guessed! =P
Yeah the waiting sucks and I really don't know what they have in store for us! lol
Aww, thankies!!

Oh, thats fabulous!!!!
I am gonna be waiting! Thanks so much~ ^_^

[bitterbird]

awww your so sweet honey. I love the dedication, your such a doll!!
I loved this it was amazing!!! I love the POV!! and the way this was pout together, just fabulous!!
and yes more please!! :D

[force_oblique]

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee, you liked it!!
I am so happy!!
Hehe, i am glad you also liked the idea and the way it was put together. I wasn't really sure anyone would wanna read something from Lilith's POV!

Squeee! I will try to have more up soon!

[define_serenity]

Aww honey, you haven't been neglecting me at all! We've both just been really busy but we shall make up for that after my exams ;)

That said, I can't read this yet, because I haven't seen ep16 yet!! But I shall save this to my memories ;)

[force_oblique]

Yes thats true hun!!
We shall make up for it then! ;)

Okies, no problem sweetie!!
Let's hope you will like it when you read it! ;)