in parentheses

May 31, 2010 17:59

Title: In Parentheses
Rating: T
Disclaimer: I hear there’s a nice bridge in Brooklyn for sale, too.
Category: Lisbon, Jane-ish
Spoilers: Through 2x23
Summary: She thinks ‘accident’ is the worst euphemism of them all.

Author’s Note: This fic is an exercise in my late night crazy. Started it last night at about 3am, finished it up this afternoon on ( Read more... )

character: teresa lisbon, character: patrick jane, fic: the mentalist, jf challenges, character: red john

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erinya June 1 2010, 00:32:39 UTC
This is amazing.

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spyglass_ June 1 2010, 05:47:00 UTC
Thank you! :)

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lzod June 1 2010, 00:50:34 UTC
very nicely done!

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spyglass_ June 1 2010, 05:47:12 UTC
Thanks! :)

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muzzy_olorea June 1 2010, 11:33:56 UTC
I love it. :D

What I like about your style of writing is the little vignettes you write that join up to show the big picture, and the way you can convey intensity and emotion in so few words.

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spyglass_ June 1 2010, 17:17:03 UTC
Thanks so much, hon! :D

I'm still playing around a little bit with my character voices and writing styles, so I'm glad you've enjoyed what I've done so far. It's a never-ending process ;)

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scarletsight June 1 2010, 18:26:25 UTC
WOW this is amazing. You captured Lisbon perfect, and almost painfully so. Well done.

~Kat

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spyglass_ June 2 2010, 00:46:47 UTC
Thank you! I love writing Lisbon, so I appreciate your comments :)

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etoilefilante June 6 2010, 21:21:11 UTC
You didn't think I'd wait until I'd got to the bottom of your rec list to come read yours, did you?! This is powerful and devastating. Well done.

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spyglass_ June 6 2010, 23:38:59 UTC
You're so sweet! Thank you :)

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