Title: Lost; Team: Inter

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Title: Lost
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You may, and thanks! I'm very glad it worked for someone else -- the 100 word thing is such a struggle because all the context is here in my head, but I have no idea how the drabble sounds alone, out there in the wild. (If that makes any sense.)

Me, I can resist some tattoos, but I do like Deki's, and how they're hidden away until he starting stripping ...

[rrr_nightingale]

That's very good, thank you. :)

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Aw, thanks. (And thanks for reading!)

[curry_chicken]

I have an Inter OTP. I can't deny it. I've tried so to hide it.

and then you had to go and drop this on me.

dsahsfdgkffiguhghjh!

this is wonderfully written martha. you put so much in these few lines. though you never mention any names, I can feel Figo and Deja's raw characteristics and desire just slap me in the face. i don't know what am saying, except it's just great. plz write more. plz, plz.

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Curry, I'm entirely sure that's the first time I've gotten a "dsahsfdgkffiguhghjh!", and it feels awesome -- thank you so, so much. I'm glad all that endless tweaking and editing made their personalities come through a bit.

(Though the two of them are so outrageously hot, they clearly get the great majority of the credit.)

[lilianna76]

oh I can so see Luis staring at him making him all melty cause I know if Luis looked at me woth those intensely delicious brown eyes of his I would melt. this was all kinds of great Martha thank you :)

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Yes, his eyes are sort of all-encompassing, aren't they?

(And thank you! *hugs*)

[pirlazza]

this is so beautiful. <3

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Thanks. (: