title: Reeling; team of choice: Spain NT

Jun 24, 2008 19:37

Reeling.  From the vibrations of the crowd and the rush of red and yellow glazing his vision.  Reeling from this sensation of running his fingers through black hair that is not his own.

David greedily takes a fistful of sweat-soaked fabric and pulls himself close to the man whose heartbeat he tries to catch in his palm.  Pressing a kiss to ( Read more... )

prompt: new, character: david villa, team of choice: spain, character: david silva, author: tie_dyed_vision

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nahco3 June 25 2008, 04:59:40 UTC
gah. I love it so much, this is really beautiful. In so few words, you really capture that moment perfectly.

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tie_dyed_vision June 26 2008, 16:03:42 UTC
aw thank you! These two can be a challenge for me to write, so I'm glad you liked it.

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labyrinthically June 25 2008, 07:10:06 UTC

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tie_dyed_vision June 26 2008, 16:03:57 UTC
thank you for reading :)

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nyseides June 25 2008, 07:58:59 UTC
Lovely! ♥

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tie_dyed_vision June 26 2008, 16:04:19 UTC
thank you!

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txorakeriak June 25 2008, 16:15:23 UTC
SDFKLJ. O___O
Not only is this exactly what happened (must be!), but it's also wonderfully written and intense and mmmmmmh. OMG, I love you for writing this. Well, not only for this, but - you know. Beautiful.



*adds to memories*

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tie_dyed_vision June 26 2008, 16:05:14 UTC
♥ You're too good to me; I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

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