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Jul 09, 2010 01:26

PROMPT POST 1

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 9/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:29:49 UTC
Xavi's team won in the end, but Andres was still smiling as they all jogged off for a water break. Leo was sulking a little and both Deco and Ronaldinho were trying to tease him out of it, and Andres was only a few years older than Leo but he couldn't even remember being that young. It was hard not to feel optimistic about the future when you were watching Leo grow up day by day.

"Good game," Xavi said behind him. "Even if you did cheat."

"You did too," Andres said, and leaned backwards into Xavi, knowing he could support his weight for a moment. "Are you going to tell me what that was about?"

It was a sincere question and Xavi considered it as such, although Andres realized after a moment that his wording had been harsher than he'd intended. "Emili said they weren't sure how I would react to the bonding," he said eventually. "Because they've never seen anyone who could hear everyone the way I can. He said there was a possibility I wouldn't be sensitive to anyone but you anymore. It wasn't a big possibility, or else the míster wouldn't have gone ahead with it, but they didn't know for sure. Anyway, it turned out fine, so I guess there was nothing to worry about."

"But - Guardiola," Andres said, choosing not to voice his immediate thought of why didn't you tell me, because he knew already, and he wouldn't like the answer any better if Xavi said it out loud. "Guardiola was bonded."

"Oh," Xavi said. He sounded startled. "I forgot that you never played with him. Pep isn't like me, he's not sensitive. He told me once that he could barely even feel Figo, and they'd been bonded for almost four years then. Pep is loud. He couldn't hear anyone, but we could all hear him."

Andres thought about that for a minute, still leaning into Xavi's shoulder. He was thirsty, a little, but he didn't want to interrupt their conversation to go get a drink. Xavi handed over his half-full water bottle without comment. "When Figo left," Andres said. "And everyone was… everyone was so angry, and upset. My roommates got into fights. A lot of the students had nightmares."

"I still don't know if Pep knew he was doing that," Xavi admitted. "I wanted to ask him, but - I mean, he wouldn't have done it on purpose. It's not like he wanted anyone to get hurt. He wouldn't have wanted the fans to throw things at Luis in Camp Nou. But Luis was the one we would have asked to get him to stop." He rested his forehead on the back of Andres' head for a moment, then gently pushed him away and started walking towards the rest of the team. "Pep said he forgave Luis. He said he understood why he left. I don't know if it was true. I wouldn't have."

Andres grabbed Xavi's arm. "All right. But I'm your bondmate, and I'm not going to leave. So don't ever keep secrets from me again." He glared when Xavi turned around to stare at him, and jogged off to join Victor too quickly for Xavi to say anything in reply. After a moment he realized he still had Xavi's water bottle, but under the circumstances he thought it probably served Xavi right.

"What was that?" Victor asked, surprised.

"Nothing," Andres spat, then shook his head. "Sorry. I'm not - Xavi didn't tell me something he should have, that's all. It'll be fine."

"Do I need to threaten him some more?" Victor sounded at least half-serious.

Andres laughed and leaned into Victor's hand when he ruffled his hair. "Violence is never the answer, asshole. Come on, the mister is calling." He finished off Xavi's water and put it aside, then let Victor shepherd him into the clump of defenders standing to Rijkaard's left. He could feel Xavi looking at him, but the coach was talking and Andres couldn't spare the concentration to figure out what he was thinking.

Xavi came over to him when the mister finished, and the five-a-side teams had been reshuffled so they were on the same one and Victor wasn't; Andres couldn't avoid him. "I didn't - "

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 10/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:30:30 UTC
"Please, can we just play," Andres interrupted. "I'll talk to you after practice, but just. Please." He was so angry with Xavi, and he didn't like being angry - he hated it, actually, and it almost made him angrier at Xavi that he had to feel this way. He could tell it was upsetting Xavi too, which only made it worse, but it was important, and he couldn't just let it go.

"Okay," Xavi said. He started to reach out to touch Andres' shoulder or maybe his cheek, but he let his hand fall before it got even halfway. "Okay."

It was fine while they were playing. As soon as the ball was in play nothing else mattered, and Andres' passes to Xavi were as impossibly perfect as ever. It still didn't make him any less furious once practice was over, and he was kind of glad that Emili showed up and dragged him off for a quick check-up before Xavi could corner him.

It only took a few minutes - Emili just wanted to check his blood pressure and pupil dilation and cluck a little about getting enough sleep - and then he was asking if he had any questions and somehow Andres couldn't stop the words from coming out of his mouth. "Why didn't you tell me what the bonding could do to Xavi?"

Emili blinked at him. Andres was pretty sure Emili had never seen him look angry before. "About the potential for reducing his sensitivity to other players, you mean? I do have to respect doctor-patient confidentiality, you know," he said mildly. "And Xavi asked me to let him tell you himself."

"Of course he did," Andres muttered. "Of course he - if something is going to hurt him or make him sick or anything, I want to know. I want you to tell me right away. He's my bondmate and I need to know."

"Ah," Emili said. He was doing a remarkable job of not looking at Andres as if he was having a psychotic break, but Andres wouldn't have blamed him for thinking it. "Well, you could have have the club lawyers draw up papers to make you medical proxies for each other. It isn't how things are usually handled but I think there's some precedent. Xavi would have to be willing to sign them, though."

"Oh, he'll be willing," Andres said grimly.

"I… see." Emili busied himself with putting away his sphygmomanometer and flashlight, presumably to give himself time to control his expression. Andres hated himself a little bit, and Xavi a little bit more. "It's extremely unlikely that there will be any other effects from your bonding, though. I know your initial reaction was a little - strong, but we did look into it for anything that could be a medical issue, and it was only because you two are unusually compatible. It won't cause any problems later on."

"Shouldn't you have expected that?" Andres asked, a little skeptical. "I mean, it's Xavi."

"Sensitive and compatible are not the same thing. It is a common misconception, but you should have been taught that at La Masia," Emili lectured. "Xavi is very sensitive and also incompatible with almost every player who has ever passed through Barcelona. If you hadn't agreed I would never have allowed Rijkaard to have him bonded. With any other player on the current team it could have killed him or driven him insane."

Andres thought he was actually past the point where he could get any angrier with Xavi. It was just - useless. "Oh. But there's no risk of that now."

"Oh, no - Andres, there's nothing to worry about. Everything is perfectly fine with both of you. You shouldn't be fretting yourself." Emili smiled at him reassuringly. "Now, off you go, before you miss lunch completely. I didn't mean to keep you so long."

Andres didn't feel capable of speaking normally to any of his teammates, so he headed straight to the parking garage. He could drive home, have lunch, and hopefully by the time he had to be back for the afternoon session he wouldn't want to strangle his bondmate quite so badly. It was a wasted effort, though, because Xavi was sitting on the hood of his car waiting for him. "Hey," Xavi said.

"Hey," Andres said flatly.

Xavi winced. He met Andres' eyes for a second, then looked down at his hands. "I didn't - I didn't mean to upset you. I'm sorry."

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:31:32 UTC
"I know you're sorry. I don't stop hearing you just because I'm pissed at you. I know you didn't mean to. But, I mean - Xavi," Andres said, helplessly, because it was so hard to stay angry when he could feel that he was hurting Xavi and that hurt him. He sat on the car, next to Xavi but not touching him. "Xavi, do you even understand why I'm mad? If you won't trust me, there's no point in this. Okay? You have to trust me."

"Andresito. I do. I will. I know I'm not - good at telling you things sometimes. But I'll try to be better. I promise, I do trust you." Xavi glanced over at Andres, looking pathetic and sad and hopeful, and if Andres hadn't been able to feel how much he meant it he would have shoved him off the car for trying to pull those puppy eyes on him.

"You'd better," he said firmly, and couldn't help smiling when Xavi sagged a little in relief. "Because we're going to be amazing."

"Fucking amazing," Xavi corrected.

Andres laughed. He looked down at Xavi's hand resting on the car between them, and before he could think about it he reached down to catch it in his own. "Fucking amazing," he agreed. He could feel Xavi's confidence and his love running through his blood like oxygen, and in that moment he had never believed anything as much as he believed in them.

notes: Most of this is obviously completely made-up - hello, soulbonding fic! But Emili Ricart really is one of the Barcelona physios, Xavi Hernandez and Andres Iniesta really do have an astonishing on-pitch connection that has led some journalists to describe them as "footballing soulmates" and Victor Valdes really is Andres Iniesta's best friend. They've known each other since they were roommates in Andres' first year at La Masia, when he was in fact still crying himself to sleep over how much he missed his parents. (The part about Victor mother-henning him to death is pure speculative fiction, though.)

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 8 2010, 07:01:58 UTC
OP HERE, AHHHHHHHH WORDS CANNOT EXPRESS MY SHEER DELIGHT. I'm so happy my prompt inspired something so well-done! Xavi and Andres were perfect for what I was thinking, and I like how you didn't just focus on them, but on a world where this could happen and the consequences the actions could have (Pep after Figo left ;_;, Xavi blocking Andres out). And of course Cruyff would be the first to try it, hahaha.

The part about Victor mother-henning him to death is pure speculative fiction, though

and what a delightful bit of speculation it is!

I am really over the moon this got filled so well. You went above and beyond what I wanted and I read this whole thing with a progressively growing smile. Thank you so so so so much, a million besos. :******

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 8 2010, 09:27:49 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried because the pairing is kind of not the sexiest, haha. (BUT I LOVE THEM. THAT IS PROBABLY VERY CLEAR NOW.) thank you sooooooooo much for such an awesome prompt!

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 13 2010, 09:17:11 UTC
Gosh, this is so well-written and so sweet I can't even try to be coherent at the moment.
Fantastic, anon, great job! Hope you write more about Xaviesta...I love this pairing and it's a pity it's not written so often. And oh I loved that Cesc is sensitive too...
Anyway, brilliant work!

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 25 2010, 17:06:59 UTC
I loved this SO MUCH -- not just the wonderful relationships but the creative, science-fictiony setting you put them in. And all that history with Cruyff and the Figo debacle and everything -- just delightful. Have you considered doing a sequel that expands on the backstory with Messi and Cesc and Pique? I'd read that in a football minute.

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 26 2010, 10:03:35 UTC
Completely random anon here, but also I thought the Leo and Cesc and Pique aside was gorgeous ("our brilliant little idiot", and how would it have affected him when they went to england?) and would also read the living hell out of anything about them. The little slice of that story given in this lovely fic is so good just by itself... but... I'm greedy?

So yeah. Seconding.

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous November 26 2010, 19:23:41 UTC
Yet another random anon, but I'd read the hell out of this if there's a sequel about Cesc, Piqué and Messi. I'm a Fabriqué fan, but I don't mind seeing Messi in the middle ;)

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous December 1 2010, 00:15:35 UTC
aww thank you I'm glad you liked it! I am sort of vaguely planning on writing this as a trilogy (when I say "sort of vaguely" what I really mean is "very very vaguely" jfc self get it together) so I can cover the 2006 World Cup and various dramatic events~ that have transpired in the past two years but who even knows haha. yuletide COMES FIRST. other fic gets written after Christmas. XD

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Re: the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 11/11 anonymous December 4 2010, 15:55:57 UTC
That'd be awesome. Can't wait!

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