Heroes: Good Intentions, Part 4 - Upheaval

[fool_of_ships]

Title: Good Intentions, Part 4 - Upheaval
Author: fool_of_ships
Pairing: Peter/Mohinder
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: through 1.21 "The Hard Part"
Disclaimer: I claim no ownership of characters, plot, or other elements copyrighted by TPTB of Heroes.
Summary: As if his world turning upside down once wasn't enough.
Author's Notes: See Part 1.

Comments

Wow.

[lalunelune]

Despite the urge to just jump to the next chapter of this amazing story, I decided to log in and say that I love this. Diaolog, characters, every thing.

In this chapter specifically:

"Nathan, watch your language," their mother reproves. "Peter, where did you pick up telepathy?" She makes it sound like a disease, as if it were sexually transmitted or caused a rash.

"In jail. In Texas." Peter watches her fight the urge to roll her eyes. "That's right, I take after you."

Just... I love it. Not only do you have their voices down, but this is brilliant writing. Also:

Probably, to them, it's just something that happens to other people, like poverty and true love.

f'n brilliant. I love that line. Wow. And the Ginny Weasley and Mary Jane references? Adorkable. :D

I just love this. Off to read more. Thanks for posting this.

Re: Wow.

[fool_of_ships]

Squeeeee! You picked two of my favorite lines/sections from this chapter. They're actually the ones I quoted to my husband as being 1) het-guy-safe and 2) funny every time I re-read the fic. And I couldn't resist referencing Ginny and MJ, given the circumstances.

Thanks so much for reading and posting! :)

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Eeeee! *runs around* I have so much love for this thing. I never want it to be over. Just thought you should know.

And LMAO at Mohinder reading Harry Potter!

*sprint to next chapter*

[fool_of_ships]

...obviously you know by now that it does have an end, right?

And I like to think Mo picked up HP out of a sense of inevitability and was rather annoyed that he got hooked...

[brighteyed_jill]

I really like how surprised Peter is to be falling in love with Mo. Awww. And I like the Mohinder snarkiness, too.

And just like that, he's in turmoil again from being cared about. Or from being thought some variety of imbecile; he can't quite tell. "I was invisible," he says, hearing the derision as the words come out but unable to stop himself. He feels as if he needs to be sent to his room, and a second later he's turning and going there. "I'm not that big an idiot."

Oh, Peter, always making life a little tougher than it is.

[fool_of_ships]

Yeah, it's a little weird to have your orientation suddenly get...disoriented. Peter's actually handling it pretty well, I think; he's got an advantage, being emotionally aware and not a teenager. Unfortunately, it's kind of hard to tell someone you didn't mean to be inconsiderate, you're just sexually confused, so sorry, shouldn't happen again. Ah, l'amour.

[avaserenity]

I was tempted to wait until chapter 7 to post but I cant... this story is awesom. From the moment I started reading it I was totally engrossed.

[fool_of_ships]

Wheee, thank you! So glad you took the time! :)

[mystery_sock]

Aw, Peter, just give in. It's an evolutionary imperative!
^_^
I am so loving this.

[fool_of_ships]

Yeah, Peter, you're predestined to sleep with him. Loads of writers say so. Try drawing stuff if you don't believe me.

;)