"Who Better To Love" ch. 10

[followthesun1]

Who Better To Love: Chapter 10

Roman Holiday

Disclaimer: I own nothing but myself and my own ideas.

Rating: NC-17

Please see links to the first nine chapters "under the cut"

Thanks (sort of) to Jess, for her TOUGH LOVE :P

Comments

THUDERIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jessica3311]

Wow! That was fucking AMAZING! Not what I expected at all but amazing none the less. You had shock value, and was the raunchiest u ever wrote them....in a good way ofc:D.....I have to also say this was the funniest piece you have ever written! I loved it!!! Now there were so many amazing moments and this was the longest u ever wrote so there is no way I can quote all the amazing parts I loved...plus u got a lot of my reaction last night via live on MSN! LOL.

I like how you brought up Nikki singing alone vs Zac singing w/ people always around him...never thought of it that way.

Very weet moment walking in Madrid and bringing Sept. 11th into it.

I was surprised u didnt take a more romantic feel to the hand holding at the premiere. Instead holy hottness after the walk there going at it at his hotel room *shocked & dead from hottness* that hole scene killed me!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jaw to the floor! LOL....so hot and funny! and then "EVERYDAY" ring tone...I COULD KILL U LOL!

So nosey Karen trying to figure things out huh? LOL....Loved Zac's thoughts about her bra @ the photocall LMAO. I love how u tied in the Madrid Interviews with the sexual tension with them....I was shocked u didnt have them get together right after the premiere but it went well with the interviews.

I love their talk afterwards in Spain of how Zac told V that he would stand by her but they need to talk when he got back...like things were going to change *sigh*

And this line “I did… but, sometimes, I think that living in a dreamworld is better than not living at all.”

I can so see that happening....living in the moment! So great!

We’re in Rome!” Nikki shouted, as she used both hands to push Zac in the chest. “We’re in fucking Rome!”

“I hope we’re soon fucking in Rome!” he laughed.

Ur killing me LMAO.....and so hot them ripping their clothes off and him going down on her on the couch *dead*

And dont get me started with the next morning and the dirty talk....HOLY SHIT WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!! And Gina ruining their moment and him having to go for the "fake massage" LMAO...im going to be haunted by that bathrobe animation for life now...in a good way ofc!

The dirty phone talk after they got rudely interrupted LOL...I love how Karen lets them do there thing bc its whats makes Nikki happy....

Him trying to relieve himself (thud) and her sneaking in for a quickie in the massage room *THUDX1000000000000*

so effing hot....i lvoe that their having fun and being in the moment with each other. It was great!!!!!!!

I thought it would of been more romantic in Rome but hot damn the way u wrote it was perfection...

“I’m cumming!” Zac shouted.

“Alright, Mr. Efron. I’ll be waiting,” the cameraman said, in a strong Italian accent.

“That’s odd, I hadn’t even knocked yet,” he thought to himself, in Italian. He took a chair outside the massage room and waited, his Nickelodeon-labeled camera in hand.

and the italian camera guy at the end LMAO!!! And his editing!!

Just genius Jen...TOUGH LOVE FTW! Im so proud u made ur deadlines! I cant wait for ch.11!!! Dont wait four months to update *muah!!!!!!!!!!*