"Who Better To Love" ch. 5

[followthesun1]

Zac and Nikki: Who Better To Love ch. 5

What Happens in Vegas… But, Does It?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the people in this story, as they are real people and that would just be wrong. But, I do really wish that I owned Zac and Nikki!

Rating: R

Please see links to the first four chapters "under the cut"

Comments

[heartonmysl33v3]

Wasn't expecting Ashnessa. lol I wonder if Nessa is starting to get suspicious.

It seems like Zac is confused because he is a good guy and doesn't want to hurt V, not because he's unsure of who he loves. Because it seems pretty apparent it's Nikki. He can't get her out of his head.

So all of Zac's words to Nikki make my heart flutter and it's so sweet that I nearly forgot he said ILY and called V baby! :P LOL. So I feel awful for Nikki cause you know she is in love with him and it's such a tough situation to be in. And I know she and her mother are close but I think it makes sense she lied about it. But then again, would she be lying if she weren't ashamed?

I love that Vanessa is jealous and suspicious of all of the girls she considers pretty...that Zac might be fooling around with but never once even considers Nikki, when it's Nikki he has fallen for, It's kind of ironic and funny. And I am sure he and V had sex since she led him to her room and although he didn't seem thrilled he did still go along with it...but he is a guy. Still sad though.

I feel horrible for Nikki, missing Zac the way she does, knowing he is with V and trying not to think of it but deep down knowing it anyway. *bawls*

Love that you included Lucas and Mo, and that Zac has been talking about Nikki so much that they have noticed! Just put Vanessa with Lucas. :P

Who the heck is Bryan? LOL. Ugh to that last phone call that had to make her feel like shit, especially since he is pretending like he is talking to other people when they talk.

Ouch...he kind of snapped at Vanessa. :P

I have always loved that song you used and I especially think those last lyrics were just perfect. I've always loved that part. And although the sex was hot and beautiful at the same time my heart is still breaking for Nikki. And I know Zac is hurting too but Nikki is the one who you really have to feel sorry for. Zac has a choice...and he is see both of them and, cheating and sneaking around.

And the way you ended it, her seeing the Hawaii photos?! You have officially stomped on my heart. :(

It was so good though and so very well written. I really love how you are using the time line. I'm so sad and emo now. :(