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eglantine_br in following_sea

I Think We're Alone Now

Oct 29, 2011 19:30

Title: I Think We're Alone Now

Author Eglantine_br

Rating G

Word Count 470

Spoilers None

Disclaimer I made Amy up

I Think We're Alone Now

Will had always had a berth of his own.
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author: eglantine, character: william bush, fanworks: fanfiction, rating: het

Comments 5

vespican October 30 2011, 15:47:27 UTC

Ahh, teen-aged hormones! This is so well written. One can really sense the tension Will feels and the need to do something about it. I really enjoy the idea that his needs may be met in ways beyond what he has in mind.
Dave

eglantine_br October 30 2011, 16:24:17 UTC

He came as a surprise to me. He is so sweet, at 17. It is interesting to me that going to sea at 12 might result in more innocence, not less. I think Amy is interested too!

anteros_lmc November 1 2011, 10:33:27 UTC

Beautifully written as always. Very touching and evocative. I particularly liked the terrible frustration of being crammed into a bed with two other snoring mids. Poor Will. I'm glad you and Amy are interested in him :)

donnaimmaculata November 1 2011, 18:18:25 UTC

Aww, young Will is adorable. So love-struck and lust-ridden. This is a beautiful series, you've captured the spirit of a summer romance perfectly.

nodbear November 2 2011, 17:15:35 UTC

Only echoing what the others have written and also saying it brings a smile to see a new part of this tale = even though today I am reading it backwards on a heavy catch up programme !