Office Visit Chapter 3

[eglantine_br]

Title: Office Visit Chapter 3

Eglantine_br

Rating PG

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Spoilers None

The Office Visit Chapter 3

With little safety to touch, they talked. They sat together, at meals, at make-and-mend, at what leisure there was, and as November came on, people did notice. The dark head was inclined to the bright one,

Comments

[nodbear]

Oh good - one advantage of having a sleepless night ( somewhat burglar affected I suppose - see journal tomorrow/today - er later anyway

[eglantine_br]

Oh, I am so glad you are back!

I was of two minds about the scene with EP an JB But in the end I decided to go with it.

I dont think the guys will be pillow fighting. I imagine that the pillows on this bed could knock a persons head off!

I cannot wait to read about the other middies, too. You and Anteros are formidable.

The next chapter is going to be a little weird. I will be curious when its done, to see what you think.

[muddlingalong]

I've been very slack in commenting, but I've been reading along with this series for ages - it always makes me smile when I see you've posted another chapter.

This one is well up to the usual standard - if I tried to pick out the bits I like, I'd probably just recap the whole thing! You've got me nervous for both of them for what will happen at the doctor's though.

[eglantine_br]

Thank you for reading. Thank you for writing. I am so glad that you like it. You probably know how it is -- i find writing is like pouring sand through a screen. You never know if the best parts have been retained, or are just in your shoes now! I have the next section almost done.

It is slow going. I have a terrible cold right now, with the coughing and the clogging, and the whining... hard to write 'at last we are alone together' fiction in that state.

But I am going to write today, and make chicken soup. Next chapter should be up tonight.