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Fic: Affinity (6a/?)

Nov 24, 2007 11:56

This is just the first half of what was supposed to be this week's chapter. I really want to get the second half done over the weekend, but we'll have to see.

Previous parts of the story: ( Part 1) ( Part 2) ( Part 3) ( Part 4) ( Part 5)

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cleo_rose26 November 24 2007, 21:25:03 UTC

Awsome update, keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens in part B!

textfiend November 25 2007, 19:16:07 UTC

Thank you.

triniliyah November 25 2007, 02:55:14 UTC

oh man, i want to know how Blair handled that! lmao I'm just dying to know how Blair took Jo going out with Erica back then heehee i hope whatever Jo's concealing ISN'T an affair...that would be horrid! and wat is Jo up to now? hmm

textfiend November 25 2007, 19:16:58 UTC

You'll see... Thanks for commenting.

triniliyah November 25 2007, 19:19:11 UTC

i can't wait :)
thanks for replying and good luck with your writing. i'll be on the look-out for an update :)

crimsonwhisper November 25 2007, 11:45:30 UTC

Hmm. Good chapter.

textfiend November 25 2007, 19:16:23 UTC

Thank you.

the_hero_factor November 25 2007, 19:53:14 UTC

Yay, update! And a very great update it is. With Jo and Blair already in an established relationship, I've been wondering, and hoping, that we might get the backstory of how they got together. The flashback is awesome. Much better than the ep that actually inspired it, heh. I can't wait to see more of this story. I hope we get more flashbacks. And I hope we get some of Blair's POV.

Can't wait for more!

textfiend November 26 2007, 02:43:56 UTC

I'm glad you like the flashback. I think there will be a lot of them. That was just my intention, to show how Jo and Blair got together, or at least to take a look at some of the big moments in their relationship in order to better appreciate where they are now.

There will definitely be more of Blair's POV, and specifically what Blair thinks of this other relationship of Jo's, in due time.

FYI, I just posted the second half of part 6. Thank you so much for the feedback.

janeairplane April 5 2008, 14:51:03 UTC

I am addicted to this story! I hope you write more soon. :)

textfiend April 24 2008, 22:08:59 UTC

Sorry for taking so long to reply... Thanks for your comment. Unfortunately I'm not working on this story right now, but you never know what the future might bring.