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Fic: Affinity (2/?)

Oct 25, 2007 20:59

Here's part 2. At the moment it's looking like this will be somewhere in the vicinity of 20 parts, but don't quote me on that.

See part 1 for disclaimer, summary, etc.

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Comments 16

the_hero_factor October 26 2007, 02:07:01 UTC

At the moment it's looking like this will be somewhere in the vicinity of 20 parts, but don't quote me on that.

Sorry, I quoted ya. But I have to say that a nice, long FoL fic this well written sounds great.

Just like they had the families they'd been born into and the family they'd chosen -- different kinds of love, both equally valid and valued.

Aww, I loved that bit. And the Blair/Jo interaction continues to be wonderful. I just love them together.

"Hey, remember that night at the Ritz-Carlton in Miami? With the Hershey's kisses?"

So, will we be getting any more details about this night? A nice, long flashback, perhaps? Because that would be neat. :)

I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for the next update!

textfiend October 26 2007, 03:23:04 UTC

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked that line since it's pretty much the theme of the story, or will be.

A flashback? Could happen. I guess we'll just have to wait and see... :)

superjudy1 October 26 2007, 02:18:40 UTC

Very nice! I am definitely enjoying it, and am VERY happy to know that there are many more parts to come. I love the longer stories where you can really get into the whole plot and the characters' lives. Great job...I can't wait for more!

textfiend October 26 2007, 03:28:32 UTC

Much appreciated. There will probably be another week-long delay between parts. Thanks for reading.

shatterpath November 17 2007, 03:42:50 UTC

The delay was worth it! This is a very believable and interesting tale. I'll certainly be one of your regulars

textfiend November 17 2007, 15:45:38 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

cleo_rose26 October 26 2007, 02:28:46 UTC

Great update! Whether it's about 20 or more than 20 chapter, I am looking forward to more of this story!

textfiend October 26 2007, 03:28:49 UTC

Thank you!

revolos55 October 26 2007, 05:23:23 UTC

I like how well Jo "gets" Blair in this. And I'd be up for a flashback of the Hershey Kisses Incident as well.

textfiend October 26 2007, 15:52:08 UTC

After all those years I figure they could practically read each other's minds, don't you?

Again with the flashback! Hmmm. It's definitely something I would like to read -- if I find a place for it, I'll give it a try. Thanks for commenting.

mondoshawan555 October 26 2007, 18:20:25 UTC

I'm really liking this :-)

textfiend October 26 2007, 19:03:39 UTC

I'm glad to hear that.