Fanfic: Acceptance

[le_chan]

Gee I feel stupid.... I just went through the whole process of posating and then did it on my own journal instead of here.... *Grumbles* Anyway, as it says in the subject I come with a short story about Benjie-papa. Scary I know, but please read it if you have the time and let me know if I did this right. ^-^

Comments

[definenormal140]

Woot Woot! First comment!

Once again, I am majorly jealous! That was awesome. I bet Melissa's mad she didn't do it first. :)

Random grammar mistakes and stuff, but that's it. And besides, *I* knew what you were saying, so what does it matter, right? ;)

Anyway, the only other thing is that I don't believe Benjie-papa knows about Rosie. We'd have to ask the author I suppose. :)

Wow, can I have enough smilies? You're amazing Lessa!

Love and Stuff

-Andrew/DefineNormal

[le_chan]

Thanks you so much. ^-^ I was a little worried about this one, but Maiden told me she wanted it posted so I got off my duff and did it. ^-^ And about the Rosie thing... yeah I was writing this like a what if, like after Benjie-papa comes to grips with it all how would he act if he knew. ^-^ That was all.

Again thanks for the comment. ^-^ Made my day>

[ssjkawaiitenshi]

I totaly loved that. The way Benji!Papa is there talking to his 'father'.

and i also understand how he has trouble saying 'Alphonse'.

Great!

[le_chan]

^-^ I know, I just had to see Benjie being a person, you know? Instead of the homo-tyrant from the seventh corner of hell... ^-^ Cause he does have his reasons... obviously.... ^-^

[ceirwy]

Amazing I love the tension and desperation and sadness that just resonates from the fic. I'm jelous you're a good writer AND artist! ^_^

"Oyasumi, Papa."
That broke my heart I tell you...

[crescent_moony]

"Oh... that's a good one, huh? Those two, in love? I can still recall the blood bath they call a childhood." <-- That line is such love. X3 It always make me laugh... XD XD XD

As always, Lessa, you amaze me. And this fic is SO AWESOME. Cute, sad, but still sort of happy in a bittersweet way. I love it. XD

Of course, you already know all of that, because I was special and got to read it before anyone else did! >:3

I *heart* you like woah. ^_~

[meia_krane]

Nee..biteersweet and it's such a very good idea masterfullu written I can already see Benji-papa in front of Ed's grave like Hoho was in front Trisha's

my fave lines :

"Well, it doesn't matter anyway. Both my boys are lost, my daughter will most likely choose another woman just to spite me, and I couldn't stop one damn thing." Another bitter laugh and tip of the glass. "Guess its time I gave it huh? They'll take their own happiness by force if they have too. Ha! I did one good thing by them, didn't I? They certainly know how to tell me to piss-off."

"Oyasumi, Papa." this is a sad one you know

"Oh... that's a good one, huh? Those two, in love? I can still recall the blood bath they call a childhood." xD he really doesnt have any idea does he? it makes me smile