Even though I should be doing homework and studying for a test...

[nabaroo]

...I'll do this instead.

Title: Lila's World (BWAHAHAHA. Setting you all up for chapter 2!)
Author: Lydiacatfish
Full Name: Lila
Full Species: Maryius Sueis Our-Worldius
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: N/A
Unusual Markings/Colorations: She has an automail arm, and is trying to achieve a state alchemist licence.
Special Possessions: A notebook filled with

Comments

[saphira112]

Y-You dare bring chapter two?! I ABOUT KILLED MYSELF!

Before we move on, when you said, "The Gate of Crazed Anime Fans, The Gate of Obsessed-to-Insanity Anime Fans, The Gate of Possessed/Missing Logic, The Gate of The Missing Gate", I couldn't help but think of how said person is NOT a fan because there is still NO SCIENCE IN THIS WHOLE GOD DAMN PIECE OF SHIT. Ahem. That said...

My sporks are hungry tonight and they're cranky cause I didn't sleep well, so here it goes: One for the game of tag (or whatever the hell it was) making no sense and thus leaving a poor reader confused as hell, one for the continued lack of logic WITHOUT THE BLOODY NEEDED SCIENCE, one for no syntax and no apparent grammatical skills, one for the fact that she got into the exam and shit and he ACCEPTED HER ANSWER, thus causing the fifth and final spork to come down for the COMPLETE OUT OF CHARACTERNESS that I feel will only get worse. Oh, and two sharp spoons for the fact she can just suddenly go back and forth to her "world", which is apparently so inspiring, and for the fact that NONE of her dialogue makes ANY sense.

Is is so bloody hard to do research? I'm getting the idea that the Suthor is only ten years old.

Also, I give you an extra spork, my friend, for saying it was worse than Twilight. That made me smile.

[saphira112]

Oh, and definitely a spoon for the fucked up time line. Dude. If she has a high school set about in, oh, say, 2005 or whatever, then how the FUCK is she able to go WAAAAAY back to the FMA world BEFORE Ed and AL lost their mother?

I need logic. This Suthor is hurting my brain and I don't like that. Cranky Saph is veeeeeery cranky >[

[nabaroo]

yeah, I just became lazy and copied half of what I wrote down for the first chapter because the Suethor was sucking out my energy. But I'm sure she's a fan of some anime (like Naruto) so that's why I said "Anime Fans" and not "FMA Fans". I don't understand how much a lack of science is in here. Not even going to mention the lack of characterization. Does no fanfiction writer want to make a quality character anymore? THe Suethors aren't even trying. They're all fucking generic. Thank you for saying the game of tag made no sense. I was thinking of writing that, but see, I'm in Canada, and I thought "maybe, just maybe, there's a place in the US that actually plays tag like this. If I said it made no sense, I wouldn't want to offend my fellow sporkers".

Nice to know I don't need to hold back.

I applaud your sporking skillsskillz.

I don't have any more faith in fanfiction writers. No one does any research. Didja know that Stephen King actually makes, like, an apology note at the beginning or at the end of basically every book, saying that he got his research from this and that place (usually with a huge thanks attached) and if he fudged any information up, or omitted anything, it's his fault not theirs, and he tried his best. If fanfiction writers could get into that...

..a miracle, eh?

[nabaroo]

Oh, and I'm glad that the Twilight thing made you smile.

[saphira112]

It totally did :D

[saphira112]

I just figured it was tag because that's what it seemed like, but even I was unsure. That really ISN'T how I've learned to play tag as a wee little lass, but meh. *shrug*

I spork well? Really? Huh... you should send me a random fanfic one day to spork. I wanna see how I do. I don't have the time to go through fanfics upon fanfics to find horrid ones...

I know, right? My friend (such a lovely girl) ALWAYS does her research. She has TWO FUCKING THREE INCH BINDERS of plain out RESEARCH (mainly from Wiki) and she's using it to write fanfic. Holy crap, you'd be proud. I am XD But hey, at least "I" do MY research myself. Like my fanfic "Metal Heart". Corny title, semi-good plot, needs to be fucking updated liek SOON, but I made sure to know I wasn't going overboard with descriptions, alchemic reactions, diseases, shit like that. And I'm considered an idiot XD I'm not gonna say I'm the best writer out there (hell, MRS-Jeevas can have that title; her works are just downright amazing), but at least I know what I'm doing half the time.