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Aug 22, 2012 16:42

Author: antigone_rex
Title: Undeniable Warmth
Recipient: Bay115
Rating: PG-13 / T
Characters: Catherine and Olivier Armstrong
Summary: Catherine makes a suprise visit to Briggs.
Notes: Bay requested some Armstrong sister interaction. Hope this delivers!

( She was just too warm... )

author: antigone_rex, character: catherine elle armstrong, recipient: bay115, character: olivier mirra armstrong

Comments 7

likeadeuce August 22 2012, 22:03:52 UTC

I love seeing a story focused on the relationship between these sisters. Catherine's motives are interesting, and she seems to have her own set of survival skills (and similar determination) to her sister. Nice job! (And I particularly like the cameo by Miles).

bay115 August 22 2012, 22:23:24 UTC

EEEEK I love this! :D Like the idea of Catherine studying her sister's line of duty and hoping to have a conversation of her. Ha, can totally see Olivier being disgusted with Buccaneer and Miles being soft to Catherine. Speaking of which, the short scene with Miles and Cahterine is very nice.

The last part I really, really like the idea of Olivier being called the Snow Lion from the opposing country. And the sisters embracing...d'awwwww.

So yeah, thank you! <3

antigone_rex August 28 2012, 00:11:52 UTC

Bay! I was so thrilled to get your name. I have to admit, I was a bit daunted when I got your prompts. But I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was a pleasure to write for you!

bay115 August 28 2012, 00:18:13 UTC

Aw, sorry to hear my prompts were a little daunting. I was trying to come up with prompts that aren't similar to the ones from past ladyfest rounds, and those three I came up with (one is pretty much from writing Shan in my Big Bang fic, haha).I'm glad to hear though you had a great time writing this for me (part of me was thinking you might have wrote this one XD )!

izilen August 23 2012, 00:37:09 UTC

This was pretty nice! I loved your characterisation of Catherine and of the strength of her own personality!

aamalie August 23 2012, 02:38:28 UTC

This was sweet! I love how you demonstrated the two ladies' differing temperaments, yet still didn't neglect to imbue Catherine with her excellent and obvious Armstrong qualities.

mebh_me August 29 2012, 13:22:16 UTC

No need to worry whatsoever: this was great. Insight: my brother is cold as ice but he really does come into his fraternal own when shit hits the fan, so this was very true to form, personality type wise.

Beautifully written as always and even though I had 0 interest in the pairing, I was hooked until the end. So whatever that means for your writing, it's got to be fairly fantastic!