Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 204, Weakness, "A Wrench to Bite the Bullet"

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Prompt 204, Weakness, "A Wrench to Bite the Bullet"

Jan 28, 2013 20:33

Title: A Wrench to Bite the Bullet
Author: kouriko
Series: Brotherhood
Word Count: 355.
Rating: PG.
Characters: Ed/Winry
Summary: "Ed, what's that?"She loses the words she meant to say, maybe even shout, as she unwillingly relinquishes her attention to memories she swears she repressed many years ago.
Warnings: fluffy at the end, I guess. Spoilers for the ( Read more... )

kouriko, prompt 204

Comments 18

evil_little_dog January 29 2013, 02:37:03 UTC

Oooo, I really like this look at their future together. :D

I couldn't tell at first if Roy'd made him take his watch, then I realized Winry's reaction was from the sight of a gun.

Good job.

kouriko January 29 2013, 21:00:16 UTC

Thank you!

I probably should've been a little less vague about that. Haha.

Thanks again!

evil_little_dog January 30 2013, 01:41:56 UTC

You're welcome!

hope_assassin January 30 2013, 10:42:24 UTC

Aww, I loved this so much! It's so lovely! I wanna read more stuff from you. :C

kouriko January 31 2013, 00:22:57 UTC

Thank you! My muse has been real awful lately but hopefully I'll be writing a little more in the future. xD

sceptick February 1 2013, 06:39:59 UTC

Eeek, that last line is so perfect! Lovely work :D

lynx212 February 2 2013, 00:40:51 UTC

Such a cute glimpse of a moment in time between these two.

ConCrit - You might want to consider fixing the spacing of your post to make it easier to read ^_^

kouriko February 3 2013, 02:13:49 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah. I wasn't sure what happened with that. xD I'm sorry. Thank you again!

bay115 February 2 2013, 01:01:08 UTC

Very sweet interaction between the two there and I too love the last line, haha. Great work!

kouriko February 3 2013, 02:14:17 UTC

Glad you liked the last line! I was worried it might be too corny. Thank you!