Prompt 203, Lost, "Begin to Understand"

[bay115]

Title -- Begin to Understand
Disclaimer --They are not mine. Arakawa owns them all.
Rating -- teen
Characters/Pairing -- Hohenheim
Word Count --248
Summary -- He is lost.

Comments

[sonjajade]

OMG this was really good- but it feels abruptly cut short. I'd love to see this continued, maybe showing how he made peace with every soul within him!

[cornerofmadness]

thank you. I have to agree, the word count worked against me. As many times as I've danced around this subject one day I will show how he comes to peace with himself

[missyquill]

Great work!

[cornerofmadness]

thank you

[evil_little_dog]

Poor Hoho! (And another lost in the desert story - do I sense a theme?)

[cornerofmadness]

hey you're right there seems to be a theme this week. Poor Hoho

[cornerofmadness]

I always felt so sorry for Hoho after his history was revealed.

[sofipitch]

Poor thing. He probably thought the homunculus was his friend, but look where that got him.

[cornerofmadness]

I know, poor Hohenheim, it was a rough start at life.

[sofipitch]

I wouldn't consider an age about twenty young but I guess when you have three-hundered more years ahead of you...

[cornerofmadness]

ha, and at my age, doing what I do twenty is very young indeed

[raceulfson]

I always thought being raised as a slave gave Hohenheim a sort of ingrained passivity that made me want to smack him a couple times.

[cornerofmadness]

You know, I never actually thought about it that way but you might have a good point there. (actually that might explain a lot about an original character I'm tussling with who also started out a slave)