Prompt 177, Standup Comedy, "Comedy Night"

Jul 22, 2012 18:34

Title: Comedy Night
Author: pedanticpigeon
Series: Any
Word Count: 997
Rating: PG
Characters: Edward and Alphonse Elric, OC
Summary: Edward hated comedians.
Warnings: None

A/N: I am posting this early due to the fact that I will be leaving for a week-long trip tomorrow and I won't have access to the internet whatsoever. So, here you go ( Read more... )

pedanticpigeon, prompt 177

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sofipitch July 23 2012, 00:48:29 UTC
Sigh, Ed why do you have to be so rude?

This was very funny.

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pedanticpigeon July 23 2012, 01:21:52 UTC
*tsk, tsk* Ed just doesn't know when to keep his big mouth shut.

I'm glad you liked it!

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ssadropout July 23 2012, 02:59:24 UTC
This was really cute. Ed is a piece of work. You can't take him out in public! Poor Al.

I'm impressed with how different this is from last week's entry. You are quite versatile.

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pedanticpigeon July 23 2012, 05:43:44 UTC
Haha! Al has to deal with Ed's difficulty in public as Ed has to endure Al's habit of picking up stray cats. I think their relationship balances out well that way.

And thank you! Now it's MY turn to blush at the compliments. Though I do have a penchant for heavy themes, I like to work around the writing spectrum and experiment with my abilities somewhat (another reason this comm is a great place!). It's very comforting to hear (read?) that my "humorous" work is approved of as well.

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vince_moon July 23 2012, 04:44:55 UTC
Ahhh, poor Al just wants to have a good time. Great story, it made me smile.

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pedanticpigeon July 23 2012, 05:49:56 UTC
Al had fun while it lasted, at least. I'm happy that my story made you happy!

PS. Your userpic is utterly adorable.

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vince_moon July 23 2012, 14:22:41 UTC
Thanks! sinkdownslow makes some great icons.

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cornerofmadness July 30 2012, 02:15:33 UTC
Al, sometimes I feel for you having such a tempermental brother. This was fun.

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pedanticpigeon July 30 2012, 05:11:08 UTC
At least the temperamental brother restored Al's body, eh?

Thank ya!

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cornerofmadness July 30 2012, 16:09:34 UTC
yes indeed he did (though I wonder if Al secretly wanted to throttle Ed more than once along the way)

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pedanticpigeon August 1 2012, 04:08:03 UTC
Haha, I've no doubt about it!

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