Prompt 171, stone, "Old stone"

[panna_marchewka]

Title: Old stone
Author: panna-marchewkaSeries: Brotherhood

Comments

[ghostfriendly]

Bit of a loose interpretation, though Hohenheim is a stone himself I guess. A lovely piece anyway, with a great ending point and lots of feeling.

[panna_marchewka]

It definitely is a loose interpretation but I couldn't resist myself. But I'm happy you liked it.

[tirinkadink]

I like the interpretation of the prompt here; I think it works very well, setting Hohenheim as a stone, idle and weathered. I'm not sure how I feel about not counting the lyrics in the word count, but rules around here seem loose enough that, eh, whatever. ;3 It's a good piece, with, as ghostfriendly mentioned, a great ending point.

Then again, I'm kind of a softy for Hoho/Trisha. Write more?

[panna_marchewka]

Thanks for your kind words. I'm especially that you like the ending, I wanted it to be a bit ambigious.

I'm not a particular shipper of any pairing, I tend to read/write more character-centric texts, but they're definitely an interesting couple, so I hope I'll be able to write more about them ;)

[sofipitch]

I think my favorite was the last line, and using refrence from Brotherhood's "Interlude Party".

I also love how you make Urey a ladies man. That in particular struck me as funny. Maybe you could write a fic on how Urey and Sara met?

[panna_marchewka]

I'm glad you like the ending :) This episode from Brotherhood seemed very interesting for me, showing us more about Hohenheim, so I'm glad I could use it.

I've imagined Urey as a free spirit in his youth, so maybe I'll write more about him and Sara. I'll allow myself to be guided by prompts.

Thank you for your kind words.

[kyofujimiya]

I like how you drew this together with the lyrics of the song. It was particularly enjoyable when coupled with the fact that Hohenheim is a stone of sorts. Very beautifully done and picking up on one of my favorite Brotherhood moments. Glad you shared this.

[panna_marchewka]

Thank you for your kind comment. The parallel between the lyrics and Hohenheim stuck me, so I decided to share this idea - and it was also pretty nostalgic, as was this episode of Brotherhood. I'm very happy you liked my piece :)

[bay115]

Always nice to see Hohenheim fic. Like everyone else said, nice interpretation of having Hohenheim like a stone. The lyrics indeed fit him well (since you said you're not counting the lyrics as part of the wordcount, I'll let it slide XD ). Great work!

Also want to let you know I added your username in the tag, so the next time you post an entry here you can tag your username too. :)

[panna_marchewka]

I'm very happy you liked my interpretation. I didn't want to breach the rules, but the lyrics seem to be made especially for Hohenheim, so I just couldn't resist this temptation. Thanks for letting it be. And thanks for me to taglist :)