Prompt 137, fire light, A Fire Without Warmth

[cornerofmadness]

Title -- A Fire Without Warmth
Author-- cornerofmadness
series -- manga
Disclaimer -- Arakawa owns them, not I
Rating -- PG-13
Characters/Pairing --Riza, Roy, hints of UST
Timeline/Spoilers -- set during the Ishbalan war
Word Count -- 708
Warning -- none
Summary -- Even the flames can’t warm her
Author’s Note -- Riza wanted this prompt the moment I saw it. Thanks

Comments

[bay115]

Aw, poor them. :< I can totally see them having a conversation over campfires like that. Great work!

[cornerofmadness]

In my head canon conversations like this totally happened.

Thank you

[lepharus]

I think you did a great job writing the whole 'military' thing. Haha, I dunno, it was just realistic to me. And all of those unspoken thoughts were so angsty! Ahh!

[cornerofmadness]

thank you very much. I'm glad it rang true for you

[ladynorbert]

Great job! Really good response to the prompt.

[cornerofmadness]

thank you very much.

[missyquill]

So good! I love what you've done with them here. They're so tired and damaged they can't even comfort each other. Thank you for feeding my angst!Royai addiction! <3

[cornerofmadness]

thank you so much. Glad you liked it. That angst!Royai addiction can be a real bear.

[kyofujimiya]

Awww, this was beautifully done. The feelings you convey from them feel so very appropriate. Great job!

[cornerofmadness]

thank you so very much. I'm glad you think so.