September Prompt || "First, Do No Harm"

[capnhoozits]

Title: First, Do No Harm
Author: capnhoozits
Series: Brotherhood/Manga Episode 22/Chapter 61
Word Count: 2047
Rating: G
Characters: Urey Rockbell, Sara Rockbell, Scar, a couple other Ishvalans
Summary: What if the Rockbells hadn't run out of sedatives? Technically one canon change, but it would have far-reaching consequences. Kind of long, but not

Comments

[coffee_gyrl]

OOOhhhh that ending was awesome! Did not see that coming. I love the view from inside Scar's head, this was great. Also nod to all the proper medical terms and anatomy, so refreshing.

[capnhoozits]

Thank you! I went back to school to study health information technology (because being an English major doesn't impress a lot of employers).

[seta_suzume]

Augh, this is great!! :D I'm just imagining all the ripples out from this...!

[capnhoozits]

Thanks! Yes, it would be interesting to follow that particular ripple throughout the rest of the story and see what changes.

[bay115]

That is going to end up a very shameful period in Amestrian history, but since the books will probably be written by Amestrians, it’ll get whitewashed.

I thought this is a pretty powerful line there.

Well, that ending sure is something. D= I can see Kimblee doing that, though.

Really enjoy this! I too thought Scar's POV was great to read. Overall, great work!

[capnhoozits]

Thanks so much!

[waddiwasiwitch]

Oh that this was the way things really happened. Loved this a lot.

[capnhoozits]

Thanks!

[sonjajade]

I think I like your rewrite much better! This was very well done and I love how you absolved Scar of his crime and placed it all on our favorite little psycho lol

[capnhoozits]

Thanks so much! I keep wondering how this would affect the rest of the plot.

[evil_little_dog]

Probably a great deal.

Great story and excellent look at a what might've been.

[capnhoozits]

Thank you!