Fic repost

[anax]

Yeah, I did the editing on Rust that I should have done before I ever posted it the first time. So most of this will probably look familiar, but hopefully most of the "wtf, I don't get why ..." should be cleared up.

I still left Roy's motivations unclear, though. That's deliberate. If anything else is unclear, let me know.

Comments

[reikah]

Y'know, just when I thought that this was the most emotionally wrecking thing you ever wrote?

You went and re-drafted it. AND MADE IT WORSE.

I'm just gonna go jump off a bridge now, partially because this fic makes me want to do that anyway (so sad!) and partially because I'm jealous of you as a writer.

Damnit.

[anax]

Don't jump off a bridge. Write me Scar/Ed instead. Or Ed/Scar, I'm not picky!

[reikah]

You know what the sad thing is?

I'm actually doing it.

[anax]

You know you love me. :D

[reikah]

Do I, Pride? Really? When all's said and done?

*Looks dramatic, flings self off bridge*