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Ok, so i sent off the 2 pages i have to Jake. I'm debating ending this part right where i have it, because as i said it's 2 pages (and they haven't even started doing anything). Either that or part 2 is going to be lenghty. *shrugs* i'll talk to Jake about it. I realized that i've described nothing about their physicality, and after careful deliberation have decided to leave it like that. I figure the reader can relate better to them if they aren't set people. That, and it'll consume time and effort meant on the storyline if i do that. And you will never learn the names of the main characters. That too takes away from the available connection you can make. There are a few other decisions that i am currently working on, like how much i want the male to say. If i let him say too much, it could taint the story.
*ponders*
*ponders*