I like this even if it's a bit too dramatic for me :D
And, speaking of drama, my parody of Romeo and Juliet is glaring at me. *sigh* I have to get back in the rhythm to twist or rewrite pentameters and I don't hve time now. Story of my life. Wonder why no-one seems to realise that Juliet is the "Top/Dom" in their relationship, prolly patriarchal idiocy. Oh Will how I love thee! Thee and my Jane are the best at this, i. e. at slipping revolutionary things under the reader's/public's radar.