The Five Things Jim Kirk Had to Tell Joanna McCoy

[flyicarus]

Five.

“And…and then he said that I smell like, like…dog…poo!” Joanna wailed as her uncle held her in his arms. “He said I smelled like dog poo and was made of dog poo ‘cause I’m so stupid.” She sniffled and settled in closer to him.

“Do you know why that boy said those things to you, Joanna?” Kirk said in a gentle, explanatory manner. She

Comments

[angstbunny]

Urgh. No thanks for breaking my heart. T___T

They slipped into their new routine as easily as if they were breathing, and all they had to do was keep breathing.

I LOVE THIS LINE. It's just. GUH.

LOL @ the thought of Spock playing tea party with Joanna.

I love outside POV fics. I love seeing Kirk and McCoy through Joanna's eyes, but I love that Joanna is very much a character in her own right.

The end though. Meh. T_________T

[yumenohana]

bravo for this beautiful fic ;__;

[acquiescence_]

I very nearly didn't read this and I'm not entirely sure how I feel about it completley, but I just wanted to tell you this was really well written. I really liked the characterizations throughout and the little insights into the lives of Kirk and McCoy through Joanna.

[northern_star]

*sniffles* Beautifully written! I like that all these events happen over a long period of time, it shows a interesting progression of feeling and thoughts. Totally heartbreaking, but heh - I love stuff like that!

Excellent work! :D

[minttown1]

This is a beautiful story.