Am 45 minutes late. No I'm not. Shut up. I'm still on time if we go by pacific time zones.

[flyby311]

It's still 5/5/05. It IS. Nobody is going to tell me otherwise and say that I'm late with my Hikaru no Go drabbles. Bastards. The reason why I'm (not!) late is because I was writing two drabbles... the second of which was pure smut. Just sex. Really. Okay, maybe three lines in the end that isn't sex. Still... Anyway, my first sex scene! Who's proud

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[sub_divided]

That was really hot, although you might want to watch out for repetition (just the right spot with every thrust...Hikaru arched into every thrust) and it wasn't really clear what the positions were. But I feel stupid saying things like that because EEE IT'S A SEX SCENE THOSE ARE SO HARD ARE YOU SURE THAT WAS YOUR FIRST ONE?! Nice!

And, the ending. *dies* It's a killer. Happy Hikago Day! You made the deadline in the Western timezone!

Note on the first one, this line:
After all, if it wasn’t important than Hikaru would tell him,
should be "then" not "than". It's an if/then statement.

[flyby311]

Ah, knew I should have read the silly things over --;;; But I was sort of like "...must get it in before midnight..." which so did not happen. Oh well? XD

And it really was hard to write. I mean, why else would it have taken me like an hour to write when I usually can crank out drabbles pretty quickly? I kept pausing and thinking and wondering why the hell I was writing a sex scene and then remembering the silly people who asked for one (seriously. I asked three people for help on what I can write. They all said sex/smut/molestation. Frankly, all of my friends are perverts. Then again, I am one as well. XD)

Positions... meh, will keep that in mind for the next time I write sex. If I write sex ever again.

Ah, thanks. I'll go change that now ^^

[arctic_dragon]

ohh...that nice...very nice...so hot!
You deserve it,” Akira mumbled into his neck, sleepiness laced over his voice, “For molesting me under the table. In front of my parents,”
Plus it's has the requisite dash of humour.
Lovely

[flyby311]

^___^ Thank you. Frankly, I think I need serious work when writing smut. >.>;;;

Haha, well, I wasn't really sure how to end it. All I was thinking was "Got to write smut" and... well, yeah. lol.

[sidecharacter]

*holds head* Hey, Icey. XD I never read Hikago, so I.. uh.. hahaha! Sorry, not going to be helpful at all.

But just thought you should know, we've kidnapped the Queen of Zanarkand in the forums because the lovely pink one decided to be cute and say we were in pain. That's so godmoding another person's character, so I decided it would be alright if we did our own. XD Hope you don't mind, and hey, we'll be able to be rich, RICH! You can pick where we go from here, love! ^_^

[flyby311]

lol, no problem.

.__.;;;;;; She did that WITHOUT telling you? Bastardy people. >.< You ought to tell her that they cant do that, and we'll let it slide this once because we're kind and nice and so much better than them. Err.. maybe not mention the last bit, but feel free to say the first two.

Me go post now. Taking a (slight) break from studying.

[flyby311]

Well, okay. I would post if I knew WHERE to post. XD;;;;; *just finished reading it all*

Umm... so we're in the demon realm? Pocket side realm? Illusionary realm? Who-really-cares-just-as-long-as-they-dont-really-follow-us realm? .__.;;;

[svz_insanity]

*_* You just made my day. I love you. The first one is really cute, and the second one is smut. :D What can I say? I'm a sucker for smut.

[touch_of_grey37]

yumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyumyum you made my freakin' week!

[flyby311]

^^;; Aww, thanks.