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flutie2891

Fic: "A Million Little Pieces"

Jun 04, 2009 18:42

Title: Punishment
Rating: K
Word Count: 226
Summary: Sakura understands why she has to put up with Sai.
Warnings: Um, shortness?
Author's Notes: Another old one. I seriously need some new ideas.

( Naruto doesn't know why she tries so hard with Sai. )

fanfiction, story: a million little pieces, naruto, char: sakura

Comments 1

kalliel June 5 2009, 00:24:57 UTC

This is lovely. I especially like the way you touched on what everyone else thinks of Sakura's perseverance re: Sai, and how they choose to deal with their individual analyses (or lack thereof). The whole piece is a beautiful sweet-sad that I think really fits Sakura and her relationships with Sai and Sasuke; a darker side, a grittier side, to be sure.

Naruto, who can make friends with a block of ice if it will stay frozen long enough

XD, <3

Great drabble!