Comments | flusteredmess: Publicity Stunts Are A No-no; Jinki/Jonghyun; NC-17

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Publicity Stunts Are A No-no; Jinki/Jonghyun; NC-17

Jan 30, 2011 19:38

Title: Publicity Stunts Are A No-no
Author: flusteredmess
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Jinki/Jonghyun
A/N: Basically, I wanted to write something where Jonghyun's dirty. Like really dirty.

( Jinki's eyes shot open, and if not for the fact that they were in a subway train packed with people, he would've screamed. )

pairing: jinki/jonghyun, rating: nc-17, fandom: shinee, !fic

Comments 39

bexy31 January 30 2011, 13:23:32 UTC

Ahh, this wasn't awkward at all!! ^_^ It was awesome!! :D So hot~ How I would love to have been on that train, ha ha XD
The end was really sweet, too ^w^ Yay kisses~
I loled at the old lady with the cane XD
I really enjoyed this ^_^ Thank you for writing/sharing~

flusteredmess January 31 2011, 13:43:11 UTC

I would so love to be in that train too okay srsly. *__*

Lmfao thanks for laughing at my poor excuse for humor. ;A; <3333

No, thank you! :)

pheebobee January 30 2011, 13:41:50 UTC

SPOT! :D

pheebobee January 30 2011, 13:49:29 UTC

OOO~ That's a very kinky scene there ... /blushes

Oh gosh. Are all the passengers on the train oblivious and blind?! I mean, if I see two insanely gorgeous guys standing ridiculously close to one another, and looking suspiciously red and dazed, wouldn't it be obvious they are doing something kinky like this? :O

Anyway, I like naughty Jonghyun and oh good lord. I'm re-reading this again. /runs and hides

flusteredmess January 31 2011, 13:48:34 UTC

This is my first time writing something as kinky as this okkk. ;___;

Those passengers don't know what they're missing!1!11 lololol. D: ehhh I was just too lazy to write their reactions lmfao. /shot

I like naughty Jjong too. :3

Thanks for commenting! :) ♥

playingods January 30 2011, 14:03:41 UTC

Y-ya! Omg, i can't stop squealing. does it make any sense, squealing over a smut scene? but i can't help it. because i love this ;////; just imagine, two beautiful guys are touching in the train. i can't even. /flails

flusteredmess January 31 2011, 13:47:07 UTC

*imagines* :Q_____________ lol dayum that's hot now that I think about it lol. /o\ <333

Thanks for commenting! :) ♥

mushii_sama January 30 2011, 15:04:49 UTC

That's soooo hot !

flusteredmess January 31 2011, 13:47:42 UTC

I'm glad you think so! ;) ♥

jongkeyfan408 January 30 2011, 15:44:43 UTC

omg. i. -nosebleed- this....-dies-
i've read something similiar but it never went this far XD JINKI! now you're supposed ot drag the puppy back home and give him the 'nice fuck' you wanted to give him XD jonghyun's dying of sexual frustration lmao sequel
the passengers are so lucky yet oblivious people :)
I love this love love love! now excuse me becuase i'm about to re-read it again XD Dirty jjong ftw!

flusteredmess January 31 2011, 13:51:29 UTC

*hands tissue* :D

Lol icwudt >.> hmm I shall think about it! ;D But damn that would be so hot okay. >///<

Re-read it as many times as you want! ;) And yes, dirty Jjong wins at life. :3

Thanks for commenting! :) ♥