this is an indication of exactly the extent to which i'm about to ramble at you XD?
just fyi, i'm rendered incapable of providing anything approaching a considered response to this, because it is ALL THE WIN EVER IN THE WORLD. thus, allow me instead to quote a bunch of your own words back at you and impart exactly why i think they worked in this context? which is to say, succinctly: I AM GOING TO SPAZZ BECAUSE OMG SARAHHHHHH.
the "J." "Y." exchange killed me dead a second time XD so clever for something so incidental. i love your brain.
“Your mission, should you choose to-“ Yunho raised an eyebrow and Jaejoong paused to wet his lips,
i'm really only bothering to mention this because it makes me happy in my heart and my places whenever an impromptu appearance by jaejoong's tongue is implied? rofl. i lingered for a good few mminutes more than necessary on that split-second visual, ngl ;DD
Jaejoong’s cold expression warmed with a slight smile. He held out a pale hand and a slim, beige folder was
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seriously. i said last night how i so wished you'd elaborate on yunho and junsu in the trans!su universe and now i'm antsy for more of them within this one? if you're not careful i'mma be shipping hosu wholesale and i am NOT EVEN KIDDING. jaysus woman break my life :/ swear i never saw this coming in like, a million years.
and just so's there's actual substance somewhere in this comment lmao, i thought your action scenes were right on the money? the initial car chase was weighted with inevitability. like, you always know the bad guys are never far behind with james bond and the same is true for jung yunho apparentlly? XD yoochun's withering reaction was the absolute measure of loyal resignation aswell. i loved it!
and in the beach showers, the confrontation between junsu and the baddie ~oooo. i could so see yunho sauntering onto the scene slinky as you like, saving his damsel in distress then and just stabbing the guy in the nut ahaha. but like, the tension and the tussle inbetween were executed to such great effect. the misplaced
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LAUREN. DYING AT YOUR COMMENTS FOREVER. ROFL!!! god ilu. just, ilu. no one else would write me these massively insane comments. ♥♥
cries! i'm so glad that the technology/action bits weren't total fail? i had so much trouble there! i'm used to writing gross fluff or porn, rofl. yay for branching out! i think all the bond music helped though. ;D
i really could not help all the innuendos and crap jokes in this. XD bond humour, i can has it prz. and ;D tiny hosu pornbit. had to be done!!! you shoud write me some hosu. :| lmao.
honestly i'm blown away by your comments. 'cause like, this was something silly i wrote at 2am and had way too much fun with. XD it always makes me so, so happy to know that you've enjoyed one of my pieces. i love you!! thank you!
no one else would write me these massively insane comments ... because no-one else is so massively insane as me? :/ lmfao. really, though. i retract not one word because...♥
yay for branching out indeed! you excel at incorporating elements from various genres or what have you into your pieces and they always fit exactly right and are appropriate to any particular story and as such enhance the plot and propel it onwards into other dimensions. ugh STOP ME GOING NUTS OVER YOU I CANNA HALP IT.
hosu♥ i want moarrrrr. i'm so tempted to write them you know. and homin :/ but i'm determined the next two things i finish are to be fluff and smut respectively considering i write angst all. the. time. and homin would have to be epic angst so it can wait. but HOSU. what hast thou DONE TO ME.
it makes me happy that you had such fun writing this and it shows in the end product, which in turn made me DIE MANY HAPPY DEATHS so is all good XDD
sazz, this is srsly amazing. the style, the sharpness of your descriptions and narration, the dialogue, everything is perfectly bond. the pacing is perfect. this is one of your best fics yet, and i really mean it. i'm always amazed by your ability to tell a story so well, to spin out the characters and plot tightly, and this is it to a tee.
ksjdhfkjs ;_; you are too kind to me, bb♥ i'm so glad you like it! this was just sth silly i wrote at 2am while listening to the 'best of bond' cd, lmao!
DIES. i'm glad you enjoyed it! nothing throws me off more than when i'm reading a DBSK fic, and then suddenly they're talking to someone called dave or jane with no explanation given.
cries. the bond humour, i could not avoid it. XD; still, i'm happy that those lines amused you! :D
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this is an indication of exactly the extent to which i'm about to ramble at you XD?
just fyi, i'm rendered incapable of providing anything approaching a considered response to this, because it is ALL THE WIN EVER IN THE WORLD. thus, allow me instead to quote a bunch of your own words back at you and impart exactly why i think they worked in this context? which is to say, succinctly: I AM GOING TO SPAZZ BECAUSE OMG SARAHHHHHH.
the "J." "Y." exchange killed me dead a second time XD so clever for something so incidental. i love your brain.
“Your mission, should you choose to-“ Yunho raised an eyebrow and Jaejoong paused to wet his lips,
i'm really only bothering to mention this because it makes me happy in my heart and my places whenever an impromptu appearance by jaejoong's tongue is implied? rofl. i lingered for a good few mminutes more than necessary on that split-second visual, ngl ;DD
Jaejoong’s cold expression warmed with a slight smile. He held out a pale hand and a slim, beige folder was ( ... )
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and just so's there's actual substance somewhere in this comment lmao, i thought your action scenes were right on the money? the initial car chase was weighted with inevitability. like, you always know the bad guys are never far behind with james bond and the same is true for jung yunho apparentlly? XD yoochun's withering reaction was the absolute measure of loyal resignation aswell. i loved it!
and in the beach showers, the confrontation between junsu and the baddie ~oooo. i could so see yunho sauntering onto the scene slinky as you like, saving his damsel in distress then and just stabbing the guy in the nut ahaha. but like, the tension and the tussle inbetween were executed to such great effect. the misplaced ( ... )
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cries! i'm so glad that the technology/action bits weren't total fail? i had so much trouble there! i'm used to writing gross fluff or porn, rofl. yay for branching out! i think all the bond music helped though. ;D
i really could not help all the innuendos and crap jokes in this. XD bond humour, i can has it prz. and ;D tiny hosu pornbit. had to be done!!! you shoud write me some hosu. :| lmao.
honestly i'm blown away by your comments. 'cause like, this was something silly i wrote at 2am and had way too much fun with. XD it always makes me so, so happy to know that you've enjoyed one of my pieces. i love you!! thank you!
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yay for branching out indeed! you excel at incorporating elements from various genres or what have you into your pieces and they always fit exactly right and are appropriate to any particular story and as such enhance the plot and propel it onwards into other dimensions. ugh STOP ME GOING NUTS OVER YOU I CANNA HALP IT.
hosu♥ i want moarrrrr. i'm so tempted to write them you know. and homin :/ but i'm determined the next two things i finish are to be fluff and smut respectively considering i write angst all. the. time. and homin would have to be epic angst so it can wait. but HOSU. what hast thou DONE TO ME.
it makes me happy that you had such fun writing this and it shows in the end product, which in turn made me DIE MANY HAPPY DEATHS so is all good XDD
i love yoooooooooou!!
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ILUSM A;SODHF;ASDFA FA THIS IS PERFECT AOHDF;OASDFDS I READ HOSU AND HOMIN AND LOVED IT ;AOSDHFADFASFSDFA
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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sazz, this is srsly amazing. the style, the sharpness of your descriptions and narration, the dialogue, everything is perfectly bond. the pacing is perfect. this is one of your best fics yet, and i really mean it. i'm always amazed by your ability to tell a story so well, to spin out the characters and plot tightly, and this is it to a tee.
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heehee i'm crazy ignore me♥♥♥♥♥
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TYSM!!!!!!!! :D :D :D
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cries. the bond humour, i could not avoid it. XD; still, i'm happy that those lines amused you! :D
hosu needs so much more love. thank you! :D
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