Fic. Rory/Jess, Gilmore Girls. ~900 words. Cigarettes. Nothing else to be warned about.
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Prompt: we shared a cigarette and shaved the hours off by
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(And it's not like there's a chance she'd ever bump into him or touch him on purpose. So, as long as she avoids accidents she'll be perfectly fine.)
DEAD. You captured them in this time so well, it's making me wanna go back and rewatch their arc all over again.
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I LOVE EMOTIONALLY STUPID RORY. And she's ESPECIALLY emotionally stupid with Jess, so that's especially lovely.
S2 should be rewatched all the time. Those were great days, from their first meeting to that DARN GREAT kiss in the finale. And of course, then the relationship with the inevitable blow up which always makes me sort of sad. Guh.
SO THANK YOU, AND GLAD YOU LIKED IT.
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And now I softly laughing to myself, because you just answered the first of your questions.
(I'll still expand a little on the why when I get back to life-related-word-vomit - because I'm obnoxiously obsessed with thorough explanations. This however is not the place to do this.)
"Oh sure. And what am I scared of?"
"That you'll like it."
A++ for that whole dialog because YES EXACTLY. So spot on. Her reactions and his insistance were absolutely fitting. And very much in character.
Loved this little piece. Very heart-felt and teen. And I loved their dynamic. Especially with Dean's shadow looming over them. Also, the way Jess is constantly pulling just a bit. Each time a little further. And the way she lets him. (Gah. My perfect babes ♥ we could have had it aaaaaall.)
It was all around lovely :)
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I HAVE SUCH A SOFT SPOT FOR TEEN LOVE and teen awkwardness, which we also already discussed :D Teen love is the awesome and it should be written about all the time and then some.
Also, the way Jess is constantly pulling just a bit. Each time a little further.
YES YES YES <3 Oh those two.
My perfect babes ♥ we could have had it aaaaaall.
LOL indeed. SO CLOSE. Though I'm actually one of the people who do all around enjoy Rory/Logan and think that could have turned out great as well. But, Rory/Jess was SUCH A GREAT relationship, even before they started dating.
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I thought I would have a bit of time tonight but Kevin wants to sleep and will not leave me play with the computer. HATE HIS GUTS.
Will find time for you tomorrow, I promise ♥
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I'm sure there'll be time, no need for fear :)
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THANK YOU <3 glad you felt all that :)
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