fic: all we know is falling (dw, amy/eleven)

Jun 10, 2014 11:14

all we know is falling | doctor who | amy/eleven | 450 words | for lynzie914 who prompted the best amy/eleven prompt to ever exist, you will fall in love with someone who is perpetually leaving you. I did not follow the prompt at all, but here this is anyway. For my mortals shall bow multi-fandom women comment ficathon. Also dedicated to ever-neutral who's been trying ( Read more... )

eleven loves amy, fandom: doctor who, fic, amy pond is flawless, pairing: amy/eleven

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ever_neutral June 10 2014, 14:19:35 UTC
NEVER LEAVE ME

hilarious.

such a shame Voldemort lost his good looks. (adolescent!Tom Riddle = the ideal. bye.)

he knows this is just a story

WHICH MAKES IT EVEN MORE APPALLING THAT HE BUYS INTO IT. THIS GIRL CALLS HIM HER RAGGEDY DOCTOR AND HE FALLS HOOK LINE AND SINKER FOR IT, CONSTRUCTS HIS ENTIRE EXISTENCE AROUND BEING THE CHARACTER SHE'S WRITTEN FOR HIM TO PLAY. A P P A L L I N G.

THE FIRST FACE THIS FACE SAW.

yep yep AND ALSO: Amy is "different". the Rose/Martha/Donna story all went the same way -- he met them, they thought he was wonderful, they all had adventures and then it all ended in tears. but the pattern is fucked up with Amy: he ruins her life THE DAY THEY MEET. she straight away learns what took Rose/Martha/Donna much longer to learn about him (HE ALWAYS LEAVES YOU DOESN'T HE). and yet 14 years later, she steps into his Tardis anyway. she introduces the possibility of change. he buys into it. what a disaster.

he'll be there to help you and save you and he'll be the first one out afterwards.

i understand him completely. i have nothing else to say.

better you stay (alone) than I.

how do you dare.

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fluffyfrolicker June 10 2014, 14:28:20 UTC
(adolescent!Tom Riddle = the ideal. bye.)

the perfect boy, really.

i'm obviously not having thoughts about tom riddle by creating horcruxes actually being the one to create time lords. the first of them all. whatever, i've never been particularly mentally stable.)

WHICH MAKES IT EVEN MORE APPALLING THAT HE BUYS INTO IT. THIS GIRL CALLS HIM HER RAGGEDY DOCTOR AND HE FALLS HOOK LINE AND SINKER FOR IT, CONSTRUCTS HIS ENTIRE EXISTENCE AROUND BEING THE CHARACTER SHE'S WRITTEN FOR HIM TO PLAY. A P P A L L I N G.

YES. BUT HE WILL DO EVERYTHING FOR A GOOD STORY, REMEMBER, BECAUSE THAT'S ALL THERE IS IN THE END? and a boy who falls out of the sky to a girl's yard, and the girl who then waits for him and then finally he flies back again only now so much of her life's passed, and all of her life is him, really. it's such an exquisite story. he couldn't pass up on such an opportunity.

she introduces the possibility of change. he buys into it. what a disaster.

YES. WHICH IS ALSO WHY THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY TO BUY INTO. he could change it all, turn it all around, once at least, to make all the other times count less. but what he fails to realize while he's focusing on changing the eternal plot of his life is that IT'S ALREADY ALL BEEN SET IN MOTION. what causes this story to seem to be different is exactly the same thing that's completely the same as all the other stories. WHICH IS WHY IT HURTS MORE AND WORSE this time. because he thought it would be different.

i understand him completely. i have nothing else to say.

we are all awful/brilliant/fantastic people.

how do you dare.

HOW COULD I NOT. THAT'S WHAT THIS IS ABOUT. PAIN AND GLORY AND SUFFERING AND SAVING EVERYONE AND THEN JUMPING RIGHT BACK INTO THE TARDIS. THE UNIVERSE DOESN'T EXIST WHILE HE'S IN THE TARDIS. NOTHING EXISTS IN THE TARDIS OTHER THAN THE STORIES.

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ever_neutral June 11 2014, 10:10:05 UTC
BUT HE WILL DO EVERYTHING FOR A GOOD STORY, REMEMBER, BECAUSE THAT'S ALL THERE IS IN THE END?

lol @ anyone who thought it out of place for imaginary!Amy to rock up before Eleven's regeneration. the story of his life literally would not be complete without her there. it all started when he became her imaginary friend and she had to pay him back before he died. bye.

he could change it all, turn it all around, once at least, to make all the other times count less.

to make the other times count less and simultaneously to rewrite them, because Amy IS Rose, and Martha, and Donna, and WORST OF ALL himself.

THE UNIVERSE DOESN'T EXIST WHILE HE'S IN THE TARDIS. NOTHING EXISTS IN THE TARDIS OTHER THAN THE STORIES.

which is why Doctor/Tardis is the one true endgame to rule them all lbr.

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fluffyfrolicker June 11 2014, 10:26:34 UTC
people thought it was out of place? OH MY. HOW. WHY. perhaps they still have a soul.

I haven't even thought about that angle, how he's her imaginary friend before he is anything else, and Amy is his imaginary friend, after she's been everything else. GUH. ALL GOOD STORIES ARE REPETITVE AND CLICHES AND THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER AGAIN. ELEVEN LOVES GOOD STORIES.

to rewrite them, because Amy IS Rose, and Martha, and Donna, and WORST OF ALL himself.

YES. A++

which is why Doctor/Tardis is the one true endgame to rule them all lbr.

YES. the only half of him that he doesn't want to leave, would never leave. (because he's never afraid that the TARDIS will leave him. with the TARDIS he'll never be left alone in the wreckage. if anything, the TARDIS will be the wreckage and they'll meet their end together.)

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kwritten June 11 2014, 14:27:36 UTC
(because he's never afraid that the TARDIS will leave him. with the TARDIS he'll never be left alone in the wreckage. if anything, the TARDIS will be the wreckage and they'll meet their end together.)

*stabs self in the eye*

*whispers* fuck everyone, honestly

0/10 friendship choices

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fluffyfrolicker June 12 2014, 09:21:58 UTC
*stabs self in the eye*

*whispers* fuck everyone, honestly

0/10 friendship choices

you're so sweet ♥

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ever_neutral June 11 2014, 15:35:13 UTC
perhaps they still have a soul.

i wouldn't know anything about that.

ELEVEN LOVES GOOD STORIES.

AND IT WAS. IT WAS THE BEST, DAMMIT!!!!!! (and we will be crying about it in nursing home, prob.)

with the TARDIS he'll never be left alone in the wreckage. if anything, the TARDIS will be the wreckage and they'll meet their end together.

it's so beautiful.

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fluffyfrolicker June 12 2014, 09:32:03 UTC
+ i know you wouldn't.

+ lol. he will. poor boy.

+ I KNOW, RIGHT?

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