For those of you who may not be aware:
In the corner of TVD fandom where I mostly reside, there is this obsession (I am not kidding. It's an obsession.) with a poet, Richard Siken, and especially his one poem, titled Litany In Which Certain Things Are Crossed Out. The obsession manifests itself in many shapes and forms: people's journals have
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YOU WILL BE ALONE ALWAYS AND THEN YOU WILL DIE.
OTHER THAN THE DESPERATION
I'M SORRY I COULDN'T COME TO YOUR PARTY
FLAMES EVERYWHERE
I'M JUST A WRITER
I SINK THE BOAT OF LOVE, BUT THAT COMES LATER. Of course you'd choose a scene right before she crushes his romantic delusions. OF COURSE!
I'M THE DRAGON. BIG DEAL. The imagery is just perfect. It's not a very powerful scene, but, GUH, you caught the essence of Damon in, like, five pictures. How are you even real???
LET ME DO IT RIGHT FOR ONCE! You understand me :((((((.
HELLO DARLING, SORRY ABOUT THAT
THE SCENE AT THE BOTTOM OF THE STAIRWELL
TO MAKE A CREATURE THAT WILL DO WHAT I SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ARE NOT FEEDING YOURSELF TO A BAD MAN I caaaaaaaan't. My girl and her stupid trainers and EVERYTHING in this scene :(
I TAKE IT BACK
CROSSED OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What you did with this section is so perfect I can't even. CLUMSY HANDS IN A DARK ROOM. CROSSED OUT. SO PERFECT
ALL THE ROOMS OF THE CASTLE EXCEPT THIS ONE :(((((((((((
LOVE, FOR YOU... Have I mentioned a broken heart?
GIVE ME ANOTHER VERSION :(((((((((((( This is what Elena does, right?
UNFORTUNATELY, WE DON'T HAVE THAT KIND OF TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FORGET THE DRAGON! My girl, her hands bloody, why did you? :(
MOMENT OF EPIPHANY :((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( Seriously, this is your moment of epiphany? I NEVER LIKED THAT ENDING EITHER?
THERE WERE SOME NICE PARTS, SURE
Guh, perfection. I love how you keep fluently jumping between POVs, because this is what they are. They're too alike, and it shows in their stories, POVs just fluently going from one to the other and back again. YOU SHOULD DO ALL THE PICSPAMS ALWAYS!
Here endeth the emo vomit.
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Hey, no embarrassment in this bar, please. JUST LOVE LOVE AND WHATEVER.
I'M SORRY I COULDN'T COME TO YOUR PARTY
I HATE THAT CONVERSATION with every fiber of my being. Especially Elena's face and the way her voice cracks when she asks him, Where were you, Damon?
I SINK THE BOAT OF LOVE, BUT THAT COMES LATER. Of course you'd choose a scene right before she crushes his romantic delusions. OF COURSE!
WELL SHE DID SINK THE BOAT OF LOVE. Guh, how she breaks his heart.
How are you even real???
Exactly what I ask myself when I read your meta :P
LET ME DO IT RIGHT FOR ONCE! You understand me :((((((.
/nods
THE SCENE AT THE BOTTOM OF THE STAIRWELL
I KNOW RIGHT? they are awful AWFUL I tell you.
TO MAKE A CREATURE THAT WILL DO WHAT I SAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am very egocentrically in love with the visuals of those caps.
YOU ARE NOT FEEDING YOURSELF TO A BAD MAN I caaaaaaaan't. My girl and her stupid trainers and EVERYTHING in this scene :(
WHILE I WAS WORKING ON THIS CAP I COULDN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT YOUR META AND THE ANALYSIS OF THE TRAINERS. YOU ARE RIGHT, NO ONE CAN BE HEROIC IN THOSE TRAINERS.
I TAKE IT BACK
In which he again, does the only thing he can, which is picking up the pieces after everything's already been screwed up beyond recognition.
CROSSED OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What you did with this section is so perfect I can't even. CLUMSY HANDS IN A DARK ROOM. CROSSED OUT. SO PERFECT
LOVE, FOR YOU... Have I mentioned a broken heart?
That, along with the entire history of human desire are one of the ABSOLUTE WORST moments of this. I HATE D/E WITH PASSION.
GIVE ME ANOTHER VERSION :(((((((((((( This is what Elena does, right?
When it gets so shitty you have NO IDEA WHATSOEVER how to continue, call it a day, repaint your room, hope it settles itself.
UNFORTUNATELY, WE DON'T HAVE THAT KIND OF TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWFUL SCENE. AWFUL.
FORGET THE DRAGON! My girl, her hands bloody, why did you? :(
When all there's left is the blood on her hands, there'll still be Damon.
OR SOME OTHER GOD AWFUL TRUE D/E SENTENCE I READ.
Guh, perfection. I love how you keep fluently jumping between POVs, because this is what they are. They're too alike, and it shows in their stories, POVs just fluently going from one to the other and back again. YOU SHOULD DO ALL THE PICSPAMS ALWAYS!
As long as you enable me, I should be fine :D HAVE TO THINK OF NEW IDEAS, THOUGH!
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