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Fic: With jealous hearts that start with gloss and curls

May 13, 2013 22:01

Title: With jealous hearts that start with gloss and curls
Author: flowsoffire
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing/characters: Clara/River, hints of River/Eleven
Genre: Humor/Romance
Rating: T
Word count: c. 2700
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: Where Clara decides she really is quite fond of golden curls, a quick gun, a feminine hand on the ( Read more... )

fic, c: clara oswald, c: eleven, c: river song, pairing: clara/river

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fannishliss May 14 2013, 00:23:21 UTC

flowsoffire May 16 2013, 17:10:38 UTC

^_^ Thanks for commenting!

honeynoir May 15 2013, 18:32:56 UTC

EEEE this is fantastic! Best use of hallucinogenic lipstick! Loving your Clara -- especially the way you describe her mannerisms. And River and Eleven are bantering perfectly -- River switching lightning fast between Annoyed with him and Reassuring with Clara was great... really liked the way it paralleled the way she talked over him to Amy, except with more flirtiness, which... yay, totes would happen. The whole read-between-the-lines conversation River and the Doctor are having (It was your place to tell her!) is super interesting too. So fabulous and :D!

flowsoffire May 17 2013, 20:26:18 UTC

Thank you! So happy you liked it ♥
I enjoyed writing Clara so much :D Delighted you liked her here! Oh, I like your parallel with the way she rolled with Amy. Quite true :D
I'm glad the bits of Eleven/River came across too! In my mind it's not a particularly easy moment for them-post Manhattan and his "retiring" (I've got a fic about that I finished writing ages ago and that will get posted in oh, two months or so? =P), first meeting since he went off traveling with Clara so I was imagining a background of tension, having missed each other/not sure whether to truly admit it or stay on the resentment. Ah well, they'll make up later ;)
Thank youuuu ♥♥♥

honeynoir May 17 2013, 20:45:55 UTC

I really, really like your Clara! She's a person with spontaneous reactions and not a walking enigma (which I admit I have trouble getting away from) -- it's awesome!

(I've got a fic about that I finished writing ages ago and that will get posted in oh, two months or so? =P)
Yays!

a background of tension, having missed each other/not sure whether to truly admit it or stay on the resentment.
Ohh, yes, this was the best part! Neither of them would give in first if they could help it...

♥

flowsoffire May 19 2013, 18:22:49 UTC

I really, really like your Clara! She's a person with spontaneous reactions and not a walking enigma (which I admit I have trouble getting away from) -- it's awesome!
*beams* Thank you, I'm so happy you felt that way! Well, now we know that Clara was a person before being a mystery… Or I do think so… The episode left me with a lot of unanswered questions, though it was still smashing, so I'm kind of confused, lol.

Yays!
Someone else did a lot of posting. Shall we reading that asap ;)

♥

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femme_slash_fan May 22 2013, 21:28:49 UTC

Oh I'd LOVE to see what she does when they both have her in/near a bed... LOL

flowsoffire May 23 2013, 10:05:59 UTC

^_^ Ikr? I was a bit hindered by my intense River/Eleven shipping and the little inner voice screeching "she wouldn't do it WITH HIS COMPANION…", but if they managed to convince Eleven, a threesome would be in order… XDDD
Can't really see Eleven being that sexually open/not combusting with blushes… but that's sort of a shame. ;) (Then again, I always thought River would be kinda possessive with him. But that's open to interpretation.)