FANFIC POST: "The Dying of the Light" Part 3/3 (Twilight)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: The Dying of the Light
[Part I][ Part II]
Author: Sara C.
Characters & Pairings: Edward/Bella, Jacob/Bella
Summary: She knows they are not flying off to Neverland. They are not flying anywhere. They are falling, down, down, into a dark and freezing cold place there is no returning from.
Notes: I hope I didn't lose any Jacob fan readers with

Comments

[flowrs4ophelia]

Hee! :D

And I know how that is. If I hadn't been busy writing this whole thing the past few days, I probably would have been reading more of your fic and all the stuff you've rec'd. LOL.

[flowrs4ophelia]

LOL, I've definitely felt that way when reading other people's stuff enough before to feel very complimented if you hate me XD. Haha, wow.

Thanks so much! :)

[tobreakfree]

whenever i read that jake named him daughter bella, i teared up. hahaha
i really like these. a very nice conclusion.

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thanks for the comment! :D

[sunlitstar]

This chapter caused me to bawl my eyes out, and not many fics are able to do that. I really really really loved reading this; it's absolutely incredible, and you should be proud of yourself for producing something so awesome.

But love is not something that can be traced to one time or one action as its origin. The things that make one fall in love are subtle manipulations acting imperceptibly, never recognized for what they are until it's too late. Feelings develop because of a variety of things that make up a complex equation nobody understands.

Quite possibly the best thing I've ever heard.

[flowrs4ophelia]

I'm...amazed to get such a compliment. Thank you. :)

[i_heart_glitter]

and now the tears start to fall..

wow.. that's pretty much all I can say.. now I need to find a tissue.

[flowrs4ophelia]

Aww, thanks for the comment. :)